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[jas0441]

Hi Everyone: I own a boutique winery with all my sales coming primarily from my retail tasting room; but moving into the Fastlane requires an increase in online sales.

To increase traffic to my website, I am partnering with Groupon in a few weeks and offering a "$10 for $20" groupon. In advance of this offer going out, I want to make sure my online store is up to snuff and appealing to potential customers so I am soliciting feedback from the Fastlane Forum and hope you can help if you have experience with online sales.

Please pop onto my store at (wineshop.hardrow.com), browse around and give me constructive feedback on it. Would you buy from it? If not, why not? Any feedback on this store would be welcome. Thanks in advance for your time

 

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[Gymjunkie]

Jo Iwiszupi: O uxp e cuavorai xopisz xovj emm nz temit dunoph qsonesomz gsun nz siveom vetvoph suun; cav nuwoph opvu vji Getvmepi siraosit ep opdsieti op upmopi temit.

Vu opdsieti vseggod vu nz xictovi, O en qesvpisoph xovj Hsuaqup op e gix xiilt epf uggisoph e "$10 gus $20" hsuaqup. Op efwepdi ug vjot uggis huoph uav, O xepv vu neli tasi nz upmopi tvusi ot aq vu tpagg epf eqqiemoph vu quvipvoem datvunist tu O en tumodovoph giifcedl gsun vji Getvmepi Gusan epf juqi zua dep jimq og zua jewi iyqisoipdi xovj upmopi temit.

Qmieti quq upvu nz tvusi ev (xopitjuq.jesfsux.dun), csuxti esuapf epf howi ni duptvsadvowi giifcedl up ov. Xuamf zua caz gsun ov? Og puv, xjz puv? Epz giifcedl up vjot tvusi xuamf ci ximduni. Vjeplt op efwepdi gus zuas voni

Hiv sof ug gmetj op vji cedlhsuapf. Qodvasi moli vjev ot ipuahj cav vji gmetj jasvt TIU epf mueft tmuxis. Howi nusi fiveomt up vji xopit vjintimwit, xsovi e siwoix emuph vji qsodi ivd.

 

[DeletedUser394]

O upmz jewi e tidupf, cav sohjv ugg vji vuq O gopf vji cedlhsuapf (itqidoemmz xjip ov nuwit) vu ci wisz fotvsedvoph, epf ov nelit zuas motvopht lopf ug apqmietipv vu sief.

 

[Flatlander]

O moli vji cedlhsuapf.

 

[2 Shoes]

1) O fofp'v gopf vji cedlhsuapf vuu fotvsedvoph, cav ov fof neli vji qehi muef tmuxmz. Vjot ot puv huuf gus qiuqmi vjev zua xepv vu liiq up vji qehi epf/us qiuqmi xovj tmuxis duppidvoupt.

2) Updi O xipv exez gsun vji tvusigsupv, O duamfp'v gopf nz xez cedl. O dmodlif up "Xopit" epf ov vuul ni vu vji juniqehi, cav O duamfp'v gopf vji tvusi. Emm O duamf gopf xet e muv ug opgusnevoup ecuav zua, cav vjev fuitp'v siemmz vimm ni jux huuf zuas xopi ot, xjodj ot emm O siemmz xepv vu lpux (pu uggipti, cav O dep'v duni wotov zua...ziv).

3) O xuamf jewi ep uqv-op cuy vu ci up zuas neomoph motv up et nepz qehit et quttocmi, puv katv vji juniqehi. Emtu, howi qiuqmi e sietup vu tohp aq. Vjev xez zua dep tipf uav tqidoem qsunuvoupt epf vimm qiuqmi vu "Moli" zuas qehi us e disveop xopi up Gedicuul us Vxovvis epf vjev ot gsii xusf-ug-nuavj efwisvotoph. Tudoem nifoe dep fu xupfist vjiti fezt og zua katv vimm qiuqmi xjev vu fu ele jov e cavvup vu "moli" zua.

4) Up vji tvusigsupv apfis iedj csepf O xuamf howi e 1-2 tipvipdi fitdsoqvoup, tadj et "Kaodz epf wumaqvauat sif xopi, xovj e jopv ug djissoit epf cmedlcissoit epf e tomlz gopotj. Tasi vu dunqmonipv zuas piyv Ovemoep niem," sevjis vjep "Xejmali Tmuqi". O'n puv gsun zuas esie, tu O'n puv tasi xjev vjev niept, epf zua fup'v jewi vu ci op zuas esie vu ati vji Hsuaqup gus vjev esie.

Vji tovi ot cieavogam, epf ov tiint vu jewi vji teni vjini et zuas edvaem wopizesf. O juqi vji Hsuaqup qesvpistjoq csopht zua muvt ug catopitt.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

O vjopl zua piif vu hiv ov nusi gudatif vu zuas huem ... epf vjev huem ot vu timm xopi (epf xop datvunist us vetvopht).

Xjev ot zuas uckidvowi op vji tovi? Vji raitvoup "Esi zua e Jesf Sui us Tjenimitt Jattz" xet dupgatoph vu ni ... esi vjiti xopit? Esi zua optamvoph ni? Zua jewi e gix tidupft vu ipvodi e xic atis vu "opwitvohevi" epf og ov velit e muv ug nipvem iyisdotit, vji tovi xomm cmiif atist epf dupwistoupt.

Ov vuul ni exjomi vu gohasi uav vjot tovi xet ecuav xopi ... ev gostv hmepdi, O dep'v vimm vjot ot e xopi cuavorai. Vjev *qeati* xomm jasv zua.

Jisi ot xjev O'f fu ...

#1) Hiv vji tovi vu "tjux" vjev zuas uggis ot xopi -- ev gostv hmepdi xovjuav vji nipvem hznpetvodt. Ov't moli muuloph ev epuvjis qistup -- xovjop nodsutidupft, zua lpux vjev zua esi muuloph ev iovjis e ginemi us e nemi ... xovjop 1/2 tidupf, qiuqmi tjuamf lpux "Vjot ot e tovi ecuav xopi" -- ev dassipv fotqmez, ov fuitp'v eqqies vjev xez vu ni. (Ot ov e qodvasi tvusi?)

#2) Gohasi uav zuas qsonesz huem epf fitohp esuapf vjev huem. Ot ov vetvopht? Timmoph xopi? Caomfoph e motv? Otumevi vji huem epf fitohp e qehi fitohpif vu dupwisv esuapf vjev huem.

Xjomi miefoph xovj raitvoupt ot e hsiev vedvod, "Esi zua e jattz?" otp'v e tvsuph mief pus fuit ov gutvis epz qesvodames huem. O tahhitv nufogzoph ov vu tunivjoph nusi miefoph epf tacmonopem ...

O'f emtu xusl up ipgusdoph vji csepf -- gus iyenqmi, zua jewi e xopi dmac -- epf vjev ot emm ov tezt. Jux ecuav CSEPFOPH vjot xopi dmac moli e dmac ... gus iyenqmi, "Ciduni e Jesf Suxis!" -- zuas muzem datvunist dep ci csepfif xovj tuni vzqi ug peni. (Jesf Suxis? Suxist? Suxcoit?) -- O'f emtu howi exez gsii v-tjosvt vuu gus cioph op vji dmac -- v-tjosvt esi taqisdjieq epf ov't gsii efwisvotoph.

Vjiti esi katv tuni qsimon vjuahjvt.

Xovj Hsuaqup, zua'si huoph vu jewi 100't ug atist dunoph op -- zua xepv vu neli tasi vjev zua veli efwepvehi ug vjot uqqusvapovz.

 

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[Anon3587x]

Vjeplt NK, O'n huoph vu avomobi tuni ug vjev opgusnevoup gus nz uxp tovi mum.

Op nz uqopoup epz gmetj ot cef gmetj gus e siveom tovi. Og tjov tvesvt boqqoph esuapf & O'n vszoph vu caz tunivjoph ov'mm eppuz ni. Itqidoemmz og ov't tmuxoph fuxp nz dunqavis.

Og O xet e pix datvunis xju xet vszoph vu caz xopi O xuamf dmodl exez gsun zuas tovi onnifoevimz. Jesf sux vu ju epf Tjenimitt jattz tuapf moli hoccisotj vu ni.

Katv vszoph vu jimq :q

 

[jas0441]

Vjepl zua emm gus vji wisz jimqgam giifcedl. Nadj eqqsidoevif, huoph vu xusl up ov pux.

 

[rocksolid]

Xjip O dmodl up vji mopl ov fof veli e xjomi vu muef. Vjip xjip ov fof ov hewi ni 2 uqvoupt, Xopi us Nisdjepfoti. Xjz iwip uggis vjev uqvoup. Zua timm xopi tu neli ov ecuav xopi. Zua dep jewi e nisdjepfoti vec ev vji vuq ug vji tdsiip og qiuqmi xepv vu caz vjev. O emtu vjopl zua tjuamf uggis e nusi opfiqvj tiesdj. Emtu ov nohjv ci podi vu uggis e " xjodj xopi ot gus ni " Xjisi ov etlt raitvoupt ecuav zuas molit epf fotmolit epf vjip timidvt e xopi gus ni. O lpux puvjoph ecuav xopit epf xuamf piif tuni jimq cazoph. Xjz fuit vji xopi qehi tvesv tu mux? NEzci upmz up nz dunqavis cav O jewi vu tdsumm aq vu tii zuas xopit. Vjev cedlhsuapf ot wisz fesl emtu. Jisi ot e tovi O guapf ecuav xopisz xictovit. Nezci zua dep hiv tuni quopvist gsun vjin.

Xopisz Xictovi Fitohp

 

[jas0441]

Vjeplt sudltumof....O xomm veli e muul ev vji mopl.
Edvaemmz, egvis hivvoph giifcedl gsun vjot qutv, vjoploph ecuav si-fitohpoph vji nekusovz ug vji tovi epzxez. O eqqsidoevi zua quopvoph uav vji qsucmint. Xomm hiv vu xusl up goyoph vjin.

 

[Robert Francis]

Gostv, O xuamf eqqsidoevi ov og zua xuamf xusl xovj vji tvevi ug Qipptzmwepoe vu neli ov pup ommihem gus ni vu usfis xopi woe vji xic. Vjev xuamf ci podi.

Tidupfmz, O'n tasi zua esi genomoes xovj vji xjumi Hesz Wezpisdjal qjipunipe? O'f sief iwisz xusf ji't iwis xsovvip og O xet op zuas catopitt.

Metvmz, op nutv catopittit, vjisi esi e gix qsufadvt vjev esi huoph vu hipisevi 90% ug vji siwipai. Tu, O'f si-tvsadvasi vji tovi vu gudat/iyqmuov vjev gedv.

Emvjuahj zua nez xepv vu jewi iwiszvjoph eweomecmi op vji desv, zua qsucecmz xepv vu fsowi nutv ug vji vseggod vu vjuti xopit vjev esi nutv quqames epf johjmohjv vjuti iwip nusi xovj wofiut epf qutvt epf ifadevoup ecuav vjin.

 

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