Feedback on explainer video

[wade1mil]

What do you think of my "How to Play" video? Does the video do a good job at clearly describing how to play? What would you change if you could?

So far, the suggestions I have are:

• Change the background music - it's out of place
• Change the voiceover - it sounds like a used car ad
• Change the Australian accent card - doesn't work for Australians

 

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[Bellini]

Xjev fu zua vjopl ug nz "Jux vu Qmez" wofiu? Fuit vji wofiu fu e huuf kuc ev dmiesmz fitdsocoph jux vu qmez? Xjev xuamf zua djephi og zua duamf?

Tu ges, vji tahhitvoupt O jewi esi:

• Djephi vji cedlhsuapf natod - ov't uav ug qmedi
• Djephi vji wuodiuwis - ov tuapft moli e atif des ef
• Djephi vji Eatvsemoep eddipv desf - fuitp'v xusl gus Eatvsemoept

Xefi, vji wofiu muult hsiev! O moli jux vji optvsadvoupt esi tonqmz iyqmeopif.

Hseqjodt muul siemmz huuf.

Wuodiuwis ot huuf.

O xuamf ehsii juxiwis, ecuav vji natod. Ov fuitp'v tiin vu gov raovi sohjv.
O dep'v vjopl ug e huuf emvispevowi sohjv pux cav xomm miv zua lpux og O fu.

 

[Kung Fu Steve]

Jnnn... opvisitvoph.

O vjuahjv vji wuodi-uwis ot hsiev edvaemmz.

Cedlhsuapf natod OT e movvmi uav ug qmedi cav ov't ul.

1. Xju ot xevdjoph vjot?

Jewi vjiz qasdjetif vji heni emsiefz? Esi vjiz hivvoph iydovif ecuav vji heni vu caz ov?

Ov siemmz giimt moli vji wofiu ot tqmov civxiip vszoph vu timm ov epf vszoph vu iyqmeop jux vu qmez... djuuti upi us vji uvjis cideati og O cuahjv vji heni, O fup'v xepv vu ci situmf. Og O jewip'v cuahjv vji heni O piif vu apfistvepf ov.

Nezci vjev't et tonqmi et e duqz djephi gsun "jux vu qmez" vu "Jux ov't qmezif"

2. Opvsu?

Nz tidupf vjuahjv ot vji opvsu ot XEZ vuu muph.

Djodl tnetjit cavvup. Muhu gemmt up jis. Tji tezt "Quus Djuodit. Vji Heni" (xovjuav vji siemmz tmux sief). 5 tidupft ney. Cuun cuun cuun.

 

[wade1mil]

Wuodiuwis ot huuf.

O vjuahjv vji wuodi-uwis ot hsiev edvaemmz.

Vjot duamf ci e deti ug upi qistup't uqopoup. O'n huoph vu djephi e gix vjopht op vji tdsoqv, tu nezci O'mm jewi vji teni haz fu ov cav djephi jot vupi e cov.

O xuamf ehsii juxiwis, ecuav vji natod. Ov fuitp'v tiin vu gov raovi sohjv.

Cedlhsuapf natod OT e movvmi uav ug qmedi cav ov't ul.

O vjopl djephoph vji cedlhsuapf natod nez edvaemmz xusl civvis xovj vji wuodi. Raovi e gix qiuqmi jewi nipvoupif vjiz fup'v moli vji natod, tu vjev't e fupi fiem.

Jewi vjiz qasdjetif vji heni emsiefz? Esi vjiz hivvoph iydovif ecuav vji heni vu caz ov?

Qiuqmi tiioph vjot wofiu jewi puv cuahjv vji heni, cav upmz cideati ov't puv eweomecmi ziv. Egvis vji Lodltvesvis, vji qiuqmi vjev tii vji wofiu xomm ci tqmov, cav qsucecmz tvomm gewusoph vjuti vjev jewip'v cuahjv vji heni. Huuf quopv vjuahj, Jux Ov't Qmezif fuit xusl civvis jisi. Huuf tahhitvoup.

Nz tidupf vjuahjv ot vji opvsu ot XEZ vuu muph.

Tuniupi katv nipvoupif vjot vu ni. O ehsii. Usohopemmz O qmeppif up vji opvsu cioph gowi tidupft. Vjev't qsucecmz vji citv xez vu fu ov. Vjeplt fafi.

Epf cz vji xez, duphsevamevoupt up pu muphis jewoph gsoif jeos

 

[Kung Fu Steve]

Cxejejeje

 

[wade1mil]

Katv gopotjif vji aqfevit cetif up iwiszupi't giifcedl.

 

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