Digital Product Marketing Landing Page Question

[Panamera Turbo S]

Hey guys,

I just finished up my new online business. I created a digital product with a specific landing page, the url is http://www.universehealer.com/ and i want to ask you guys what do you think about the landing page for my product? It is ok? Can i improve it ?

Thanks a lot for any reply!

 

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[AndrewNC]

From my perspective, I like the look of it.

But with that being said, the numbers will give you your answer. Have 1,000 people land on your page and see what happens.

 

[The Grind]

Every single word in the testimonials screams BS. The grammar isn't accurate at all. Every single " i " inst even capitalized.

Read your website as a consumer.

One more thing.

So your a millionaire aye? That's great. You BECAME a millionaire and now your helping others do the same. That's excellent.

I would hate to know that your just ANOTHER guy selling a " get rich " product when you yourself are just an average Joe.

 

[Digamma]

It's confused. The eye wanders. There is no clear goal for it.
The typography is too small and hard to read because of bad contrast.
The header and the Jumbotron compete for attention, and the result is confusing.
The grammar is abysmal.

 

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[Gsuz]

If you decide on using fake testimonials, make at least sure that the gender of name and the stock photo match.

 

[AgainstAllOdds]

Hire someone that's a native English speaker to rewrite everything. If you want to take it a step further, hire a copywriter. What you have on the site now will not sell.

Plus, since you ripped the main video for the site, is it safe to assume that you also ripped the product you're selling? If so, then you should scrap the site altogether and work on something else that's a) more ethical; and b) if it works, won't get you sued into the ground.

 

[The Grind]

But dude.

The website is beautiful

 

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[early riser]

I can see clearly you wrote the testimonials as your "i" in your post isn't capital on your post or on the site as well as the fact that neither come off as a native English speaker.

The video makes it clear that the Ferrari is actually at a dealership and it takes a bit to figure out what you are actually selling...

Also, under your products "Deep Relaxation for Removing Completely Stress"...that would be "Removing Stress Completely"

Just a few things I quickly noticed.

 

[Timbonitus]

It's confused. The eye wanders. There is no clear goal for it.
The typography is too small and hard to read because of bad contrast.
The header and the Jumbotron compete for attention, and the result is confusing.
The grammar is abysmal.

Exactly what I was going to say. I like the website theme but there's a lot of work that needs to be done. What's the point of the video? Your products are also kind of strange. What is "Relaxing Howling Wind"? I would rewrite the entire website... or focus on something else.

 

[Kevin Peter]

2. Autosugestion (no space?)

This sentence doesn't make sense -
Here is a list of messages we receive from our customers which already experience their new lives


I see that you do not have internal hyperlinks. Any particular reasons? Having it might help you boost the SEO page ranking.

 

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[DaRK9]

That's one of the best landing page templates ever. Used it for a client before.

Besides what others have mentioned I would look at creating a free trial option instead of the Buy Now right away. It's too soon.

Plus I have no clue what it is.

 

[piesandak47]

wow are you seriously using fake testimonials and pics? If so, eat a d*ck

Reverse image search is a magical thing...

Do a reverse image search on Albert C. Adams and Silke Fassbinder guys.

Delete them ASAP or trash your whole business.

 

[piesandak47]

Every single word in the testimonials screams BS. The grammar isn't accurate at all. Every single " i " inst even capitalized.

Read your website as a consumer.

One more thing.

So your a millionaire aye? That's great. You BECAME a millionaire and now your helping others do the same. That's excellent.

I would hate to know that your just ANOTHER guy selling a " get rich " product when you yourself are just an average Joe.

This guy is a scam, man. Someone who's a millionaire wouldn't be going on a public forum asking for advice on something as simple as a landing page.

That's newbie 101 stuff.

And he's using fake testimonials.

 

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[Aktion]

Dude seriously listen to what everyone is telling you here.

My personal opinion:

• the website is aesthetically pleasing but that doesn't mean anything.
• I'm confused what it is you're offering
• you're telling me to buy now and I'm not ready
  
• you're showing me videos of fancy cars thinking I'm going to get inspired but I'm not, it just makes me think "so what?"
• you're not giving me any value, telling me about your product, or even showing me a part of your product
• I don't trust you or what you're saying

You're asking us to give you advice on your landing page, but I suspect you need help creating a good and honest product.

 

[piesandak47]

just read the rest of the page. Don't know why i'm even wasting my time with this...but it just pisses me off.

You don't deserve to sell something like this.

Don't even know where to start...you don't need advice on landing page design.

You don't even get to deserve to call it a business.

Shut this crap down ASAP.

 

[Tobore]

so after this thread....

https://www.thefastlaneforum.com/community/threads/wrong-price-or-wrong-marketing.59900/#post-455534

all you did was

a specific landing page

?

C'mon man! Create SOMETHING VALUABLE and stop asking questions about graphics and landing pages...

 

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[The Grind]

This guy is a scam, man. Someone who's a millionaire wouldn't be going on a public forum asking for advice on something as simple as a landing page.

That's newbie 101 stuff.

And he's using fake testimonials.

Hence the sarcasm in what I said.