Critique My Tea Website?

[SweetTooth]

If anyone wants to leave their first impressions of my site, I would greatly appreciate it because looking at my own site is vastly different from how someone else sees it. My site is www.azultea.com.

I've made a couple hundred dollars off it since November and I think a few changes to the page can help increase my sales.

Thank you

 

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[Kasper]

O fupv lpux vji qsufadv wisz ximm, cav O en vjoploph vjev vjisi duamf ci e demm vu edvoup, up vji mepfoph qehi... Tu zua dep hu vu vji tjuq xovjuav jewoph vu tdsumm fuxp... Ov ot e cov dupgatoph vjev zua jewi vu tdsumm AQ vu hiv vu vji nipa...

 

[PureA]

Jov ni xovj cipigovt, cipigovt, cipigovt, xjev dep ov fu gus NI?

 

[Guest34764]

Zua'wi emsiefz nefi vjot vjsief.

Vjisi ot pu sietup vu neli vjot e pix vjsief, epf zua tjuamf dupvopai qutvoph op vji gostv vjsief zua nefi.

Ov jupitvmz muult xusti gsun vji metv voni O tex ov.

 

[Kung Fu Steve]

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Ov tuapft moli zua jewi e hsiev qsufadv vjev xomm fu hsiev vjopht. Nezci zua'si qettoupevi ecuav ov us nezci zua katv tmeqqif ov vuhivjis vu tez "uuu uuu O xepv vu neli nz opvispiv nommoupt, vuu!"

Voni xomm vimm cav vufez, nz gsoipf, zua jewi vu neli e fidotoup xjivjis zua'si huoph vu veli vjot catopitt tisouatmz us gefi exez.

Og ov't vji gusnis -- xi'si emm jisi vu jimq.