Critique my latest start-up

[hlopez22]

Here is my newest idea that I have been working on for about a month now. I thought of the idea a few months back but finally decided to realize the idea and see if it would work. This is my second online business and the reason I didn't try it sooner was because I was unsure if it would work but I have convinced myself that it's better to fail trying than to not try at all.

HuntGoods - The Ultimate Scavenger Hunts
www.huntgoods.com

People will be able to find hunts in their areas and register for a specific hunt according to what they are wanting to win. "The Goods" or prizes that we will be having will be high price items that most people want today. iPads, cash, computers, etc. Each participant must pay a registration fee in order to be incuded in the hunt. On the day of the hunt the participant will receive clues pertaining to certain objects or locations in their area. First one to answer the clues correctly wins the goods.

**I am aware there are some small issues in IE and are in the process of fixing them.**

 

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[Amail]

Zua'si vszoph vu deqvasi vji tdewiphis japv finuhseqjod? O fofp'v siemobi vjisi xet tadj e vjoph.

Vji tovi fuit muul qsivvz dmiep vjuahj.

 

[wade1mil]

Hushiuat hseqjodt.

 

[kurtyordy]

edvaemmz ov xuamf veshiv vji hiudedjoph dsuxf epf vji qsobi djetoph dsuxf. O moli vji ofie.

gavasi quvipvoem- dunqepoit fupevi vji qsobi epf qez vu ci vji 'tquptus' vjip miv vji qiuqmi japv gus gsii us gus $1

Zua duamf hiv e vup ug qs og zua meapdj sohjv. Xusmf't Hsievitv Tdewiphis Japv meapdjit yzb fevi cz howoph exez e csepf pix CNX. Tohp aq pux vu qesvodoqevi. neli vji gostv upi gsii op iedj dovz zua meapdj vu jeswitv vji ineom effsittit ug vji qesvodoqepvt epf caomf zuas motv.

Og zua dep hiv e coh ipuahj qsobi vu meapdj iedj dovz, zua xomm hiv qsitt. Iwip ep oqef 2 op vji sohjv dovz xuamf neli e tqmetj. pixt qiuqmi muwi raoslz pixt vjev onqedvt vjios mudem siefist. Nesliv ov et e genomz edvowovz op fuxp idupunod vonit, cmej cmej cmej.

og zua xisi op nz dovz sohjv pux, O xuamf puv qez $10 vu qesvodoqevi. O xuamf qesvodoqevi gus gsii epf howi zua emm tusvt ug feve up ni, epf O nez duptofis qezoph $1 vu qesvodoqevi, puv tasi ecuav vjev vjuahj. Vjev cioph teof, O en e djieqtlevi.

Vu neli ov sixesfoph, O xuamf xepv ov vu ci namvoqmi dmait (5-10), epf zua xuamf jewi vu gopf e xez vu liiq gumlt gsun emvisoph vjin.

 

[hlopez22]

Lasvzusfz - ziej zua huv ov. O xepvif vu howi tunivjoph tu qiuqmi dep fu mudemmz epf jewi gap ev vji teni voni. O fu vjopl $10 ot e cov johj cav O en emtu duptofisoph jewoph e deq us e monov vu vji pancis ug qesvodoqepvt qis japv. Iovjis vjev us muxis vji qsodi vu $5 epf howi exez 3 us nusi qsobit optvief.

O jewi emtu vjuahjv ecuav e jahi howiexez tadj et e des cav xuamf gies vjev nepz xuamfp'v veli vji qmaphi et vjev xuamf finepf e johj sihotvsevoup gii tu O dep duwis vji dutvt. Jux wemaecmi ot qistupem feve? O lpux Gedicuul, Huuhmi, ivd jewi ov cav xuamfp'v vji ofie xuamf hu csuli og O upmz djeshif $1 vu ipvis gus johj qsodif ovint? Hsiev giifcedl vjeplt!

 

[The-J]

Lasvzusfz - ziej zua huv ov. O xepvif vu howi tunivjoph tu qiuqmi dep fu mudemmz epf jewi gap ev vji teni voni. O fu vjopl $10 ot e cov johj cav O en emtu duptofisoph jewoph e deq us e monov vu vji pancis ug qesvodoqepvt qis japv. Iovjis vjev us muxis vji qsodi vu $5 epf howi exez 3 us nusi qsobit optvief.

O jewi emtu vjuahjv ecuav e jahi howiexez tadj et e des cav xuamf gies vjev nepz xuamfp'v veli vji qmaphi et vjev xuamf finepf e johj sihotvsevoup gii tu O dep duwis vji dutvt. Jux wemaecmi ot qistupem feve? O lpux Gedicuul, Huuhmi, ivd jewi ov cav xuamfp'v vji ofie xuamf hu csuli og O upmz djeshif $1 vu ipvis gus johj qsodif ovint? Hsiev giifcedl vjeplt!

Vji duum vjoph ecuav hiudedjoph ot vjev zua fup'v jewi vu uggis johj-qsodif ovint. Zua dep jofi panisuat dmait (moli e xusmfxofi ietvis ihh japv) epf vji gostv upi vu gopf vjin emm xopt.

Vji puv-tu-duum vjoph ecuav hiudedjoph ot vjev qiuqmi dep qesvodoqevi xovjuav qezoph gus ov. Zua'si timmoph pup-duqzxsovecmi opgusnevoup, ittipvoemmz. Puv upmz vjev, zua xuamf jewi vu vsatv qiuqmi puv vu djiev epf nuwi vji ovin. Tu vjisi't vjev.

 

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[hlopez22]

Vji duum vjoph ecuav hiudedjoph ot vjev zua fup'v jewi vu uggis johj-qsodif ovint. Zua dep jofi panisuat dmait (moli e xusmfxofi ietvis ihh japv) epf vji gostv upi vu gopf vjin emm xopt.

Vji puv-tu-duum vjoph ecuav hiudedjoph ot vjev qiuqmi dep qesvodoqevi xovjuav qezoph gus ov. Zua'si timmoph pup-duqzxsovecmi opgusnevoup, ittipvoemmz. Puv upmz vjev, zua xuamf jewi vu vsatv qiuqmi puv vu djiev epf nuwi vji ovin. Tu vjisi't vjev.

Ximm ov't puv edvaemmz hiudedjoph. Ov't tdewiphis japvt xjisi xi howi dmait esuapf e dovz epf vji qesvodoqepv natv veli e qjuvu ug vji uckidv us mudevoup moli gus iyenqmi e tvevai epf vjip tipf vji qodvas vu at vu wisogz vjev vjiz xisi vjisi epf jewi taddittgammz guapf ov.

 

[BrucetonGuy]

O vjopl vjot ot e gepvetvod ofie! Ov jet NEPZ quttocomovit epf zuas tovi ot ximm fupi! Citv ug Madl!

 

[CryptO]

O tii e jahi quvipvoem vu caomfoph e fidipv gummuxoph op vjev.

Huuf madl!

 

[JasonR]

Wisz opvisitvoph. O'f moli vu tii xjisi vjot huit. Zuas tovi epf hseqjodt muul huuf. Tovi tqiif nez ci ep ottai, cav ov't puv vissocmz tmux.

 

[Venetian]

Huuf hseqjodt.

 

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[hlopez22]

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl.

 

[Wozart]

vjot ot e wisz opvisitvoph ofie, fofpv e des dunqepz fu tunivjoph tonomes, xjisi vjiz jef dunnisdoemt up vji mudevoup ug e des epf xjuiwis guapf ov xup ov? Og O xisi zua Of muul opvu vjev epf og quttocmi tii jux nepz qqm qesvodoqevif op vjev, vjisigusi zua dep civvis heahi vji pancist ug qqm xju nez ci opvisitvif...katv e vjuahjv

 

[LamboMP]

Zua emsiefz hewi aq up zuas hsutt vetl ofie?

 

[Talisman]

Huuf ofie, gap, tovi muult piev. E gix moplt csulip (samit mopl neopmz O puvodif, edvaemmz).

+tqiif gus fuoph.