Lex DeVille
Sweeping Shadows From Dreams
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There you go bro, just do you.
What works for you as long as you're moving forward and helping people.
Based on your copy above I don't know what you're waiting for with Upwork.
Fill out your bio and start applying to gigs. It's good enough. Then practice as you go.
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The writing is good enough. It's better than what foreigners from third-world countries can do.
Right now it's like a big block of stone. You've got the concept, now chisel it into a fine work of art.
Read it out loud several times and notice where it's hard to finish the sentence. Notice what seems long to you.
Chisel away anything that doesn't need to be there. Make it flow like you're telling a friend.
With copywriting it's your job to write copy first. Design setup is usually done by the client.
So just focus on getting the message across in ways that impact people.
Read it out loud and if it makes you feel something, you're off to a good start.
Once you get your first client, just ask lots of questions to get clear about what exactly they need.
Then boom. Instant copywriter.