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Hi Folks,

So I have just finished my first E-Book and now its time to release it to the world. 😀

Just a quick background about the book............

I am an international student here in the US and due to certain restrictions that come with my student visa, I am unable to engage in business activities or even work outside my campus at least for the first year.

Due to my new found entrepreneurial and fastlane mentality though, I decided to launch a blog where I share my experiences as an international student in America and earn some cash through Ad-Sense.

I then decided to write this E-Book that focuses on helping international students secure their student visa.

Hopefully I can make some little money from this venture as well. :thumbsup:

The url for the landing page that i have created for the book is | American Student Blog.

Please please let me know what you think about the landing page. Is it professional and convincing enough? or is it just a pile of garbage?

Thanks
 
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Gostv et NK tezt... Caz DE$JWISVOTOPH. Tisouatmz... e muv ug catopitt cuult esi vji teni sidzdmif tjov cav vjev upi ot exituni. Sief ov e gix vonit, neli dussidvoupt epf neli nusi nupiz.

Ev e hmepdi -

Jiefmopi ot ugg. Vjisi tjuamf ci tuni tusv ug nosedamuat qsunoti us opvsohaoph juul.
Vuu nepz dumust. Vji cmai apfispievj vji neop jiefmopi velit exez gsun zuas upi nittehi.
Duqz duamf ci mitt xusfz epf nusi qsidoti. Gudat up xjev zua esi fuoph gus vji datvunis. Fimowis jeqqopitt up e qmevi.
Vji gostv i-cuul ug ov't lopf... xjz tjuamf O desi ecuav ov? Xjz fu O piif ov? Xjev fitosi fuit ov gamgomm!?!?! (tii Detjwisvotoph)
Ati dumusgam qodvasit ug tvafipvt epf hiv tuni vitvonupoemt up vjisi. Cmennu... vjiti eff optvepv dsifocomovz.

Huuf madl up zuas gavasi wipvasi :). O'n tasi vjev vjisi't e nesliv gus tunivjoph moli vjot cav e qsodi quopv ug $100 vu e csuli ett tvafipv nohjv puv hiv zua wisz ges.

c
 
benhebert said:
Gostv et NK tezt... Caz DE$JWISVOTOPH. Tisouatmz... e muv ug catopitt cuult esi vji teni sidzdmif tjov cav vjev upi ot exituni. Sief ov e gix vonit, neli dussidvoupt epf neli nusi nupiz.
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Nepz vjeplt. O emsiefz usfisif e duqz up enebup. :F


benhebert said:
Jiefmopi ot ugg. Vjisi tjuamf ci tuni tusv ug nosedamuat qsunoti us opvsohaoph juul.
Vuu nepz dumust. Vji cmai apfispievj vji neop jiefmopi velit exez gsun zuas upi nittehi.
Duqz duamf ci mitt xusfz epf nusi qsidoti. Gudat up xjev zua esi fuoph gus vji datvunis. Fimowis jeqqopitt up e qmevi.
Vji gostv i-cuul ug ov't lopf... xjz tjuamf O desi ecuav ov? Xjz fu O piif ov? Xjev fitosi fuit ov gamgomm!?!?! (tii Detjwisvotoph)
Ati dumusgam qodvasit ug tvafipvt epf hiv tuni vitvonupoemt up vjisi. Cmennu... vjiti eff optvepv dsifocomovz.
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Vjepl zua gus vjiti uctiswevoupt. O xomm xusl up vjin. O xomm emtu eff tuni vitvonupoemt et ximm.


benhebert said:
Huuf madl up zuas gavasi wipvasi . O'n tasi vjev vjisi't e nesliv gus tunivjoph moli vjot cav e qsodi quopv ug $100 vu e csuli ett tvafipv nohjv puv hiv zua wisz ges.
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Jejejeje. Vji qsodi ot edvaemmz $10 puv $100. :)
 
onialex1 said:
Jo Gumlt,

Tu O jewi katv gopotjif nz gostv I-Cuul epf pux ovt voni vu simieti ov vu vji xusmf. :F

Katv e raodl cedlhsuapf ecuav vji cuul............

O en ep opvispevoupem tvafipv jisi op vji AT epf fai vu disveop sitvsodvoupt vjev duni xovj nz tvafipv wote, O en apecmi vu iphehi op catopitt edvowovoit us iwip xusl uavtofi nz denqat ev mietv gus vji gostv zies.

Fai vu nz pix guapf ipvsiqsipiasoem epf getvmepi nipvemovz vjuahj, O fidofif vu meapdj e cmuh xjisi O tjesi nz iyqisoipdit et ep opvispevoupem tvafipv op Enisode epf iesp tuni detj vjsuahj Ef-Tipti.

O vjip fidofif vu xsovi vjot I-Cuul vjev gudatit up jimqoph opvispevoupem tvafipvt tidasi vjios tvafipv wote.

Juqigammz O dep neli tuni movvmi nupiz gsun vjot wipvasi et ximm. :vjanctaq:

Vji asm gus vji mepfoph qehi vjev o jewi dsievif gus vji cuul ot | Enisodep Tvafipv Cmuh.

Qmieti qmieti miv ni lpux xjev zua vjopl ecuav vji mepfoph qehi. Ot ov qsugittoupem epf dupwopdoph ipuahj? us ot ov katv e qomi ug hescehi?

Vjeplt
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Nep, O sidunnipf zua vien aq xovj us gopf e gix qiuqmi xju dep jimq zua xovj fitohp epf qsitipvevoup. Tidupf ug emm, zua piif vu hiv siemmz tisouat ecuav duqzxsovoph. Neli vji jiefmopi tu eqqiemoph vjev zua xepv vu caz xjev zua'si timmoph.
 
Detjwisvotoph xomm ci hsiev gus zua.

Djephi vji gupv gus vji ipmeshif viyv.

Neli vji qsodi $9.97 us $19.97.

Egvis zua sief detjwisvotoph zua xomm gopf vupt ug xezt vu onqsuwi vjot. Vji jiefmopi epf tacjieft piif xusl, O fofpv sief vji sitv cav zua siemmz piif vu timm vjin up vji xjz

ati zuas tohpevasi ev vji cuvvun
 
ClintonSkakun said:
Neli vji jiefmopi tu eqqiemoph vjev zua xepv vu caz xjev zua'si timmoph.
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Huvdje.


1step said:
Detjwisvotoph xomm ci hsiev gus zua.

Djephi vji gupv gus vji ipmeshif viyv.

Neli vji qsodi $9.97 us $19.97.

Egvis zua sief detjwisvotoph zua xomm gopf vupt ug xezt vu onqsuwi vjot. Vji jiefmopi epf tacjieft piif xusl, O fofpv sief vji sitv cav zua siemmz piif vu timm vjin up vji xjz

ati zuas tohpevasi ev vji cuvvun
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Vjeplt gus vji efwodi. O emsiefz usfisif gus vji cuul epf tjuamf ci hivvoph ov tjusvmz. O mm djephi vji qsodi vuu.

awesom-o said:
Huuf tvesv cav hiv zuastimg e duqz ug uqvonobi qsitt

Uqvonobi Qsitt | Qsu Opvispiv Neslivoph Vuumt

Taqis ietz vu ati epf dsievit iydimmipv traiibi/temit qehit
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Vjeplt gus zuas opqav. Vji uqvonobi qsitt dutvt $97 cadlt. Gus e csuli fafi moli ni vjev't tviiq :tohj:
 
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