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I spent most of today reading on how to structure the feminine journey in more detail. This made a few things I could have done much more strongly show up in story structure.
Carmen's plight isn't clear because I skipped like every other stage in my story development. I wrote a story - and it's gripping and emotionally riveting - but there's no arc from which the story flows naturally. Now I can examine the story yet again to see what I can do to strengthen the narrative.
Now I'm onto building her archetype. Carmen is a confused a$$ child... a grown woman-child, but she fits in with and archetype known as the maiden. She's a natural innocent, pretty naive, creative. Deep within she may be more of an Aphrodite/Amazon blend... but she's hidden beneath this Maiden personality - which has nurturing tendencies.
Being a Maiden puts her into a crisis, and the battle for transformation - into a newer, stronger Maiden that co-exists with the other archetypes she fights against being, within.
If you need a rundown of archetypes, the book above is my reference. (No aff links or anything.)
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This week I finish the modules on my product... and the audios, then release it into the world as a complete project.
Have gotten great reviews - even this week - and I feel it's ready to be released... At the very minimum it will also be published.