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Free registration at the forum removes this block.Nice. Is this yours?
Nah, I wish. I'm still some shit lol, but I'm working on itNice. Is this yours?
Others link it to the lack of polution.
Misspelled pollution btw:
It's one of Ezra Firestone's companies. He has an incredibly talented team.
Good luck man.Yes, thank you.
I am in the process of launching my skin care product, this is a great copy reference for me to use.
How did you come by this landing page? Did you see it on an ad or was it through a post like this?
You have to understand that the majority of consumers do not think like you do. The majority of consumers are guided by emotion and impulse, not logic and reason. ESPECIALLY when it comes to making purchases.Ok, I read all of this because it was recommended as being good. And clearly it is. Lots of lessons I can take from it.
But, if I was looking at this as a customer. I would have been out after twelve words.
Now, I realise that I am the ideal customer avatar for this brand. But there is a major inaccuracy in this copy. It claims the product is chemical free. No, no it isn't.
Now, being science minded this complete falsehood turned me off. But is this inaccuracy (lie?) going to attract more customers than it will turn away?
Is it, on occasion a viable option to play loose with the facts in order to attract more people, knowing full well that you may alienate some. Or in actual fact is never a good idea to be loose with the truth?
Good luck man.
And I just randomly came across it to be honest lol. If you're looking for other examples related to what you're doing just google things like "copywriting swipe file" "best skin care advertisements" "best skin care sales letters and copywriting" "advertising headlines swipe file" "list of proven sales letters"
Idk anything along those lines lol
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