What do you think of my first blog post? (Business write-up)

[UniEntrepreneur]

I became a full time entrepreneur around 7 months ago. Since then I've created 5 successful businesses with my business partner. We started this blog to document our journey with business write-ups - with the goal of writing the most informative and actionable possible content. The first article is about our first business, KitchPack, selling 33 piece boxes of kitchenware to incoming students.

We executed the whole business in less than week, making $3370 in net profit. We say how we:

• Came up with the idea
• Validated the concept through market research and negotiating to secure margins
• Created a simple e-commerce site and raised $1740 with free marketing sources before ordering any stock
• Used this data tp design our paid marketing campaigns
• Sold out the rest of the stock in less than 24 hours
• How we're expanding the business this year

Any comments on the hook we use, tone of the article, length, any bits that were unclear, etc would be awesome. Here's the link:

http://unientrepreneur.com/2014/02/kitchpack-make-2000-week/

Let me know what you think

James

 

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