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EXECUTION My Second White Paper... Seeking Feedback

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Hey all, alongside developing a failed SaaS product, I've managed to produce my second white paper. Unlike the first, the second was a mock up intended to drum up interest for my white paper services.

I am attaching it to this post, and would be grateful if anyone with a keen eye on copy would be willing to tell me what they like / dislike.

Appreciate any feedback.

- Cheers
 

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