Getting From 0$ to a 1000$

[Fatman0]

Opinions?

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YzCVLZ9dm60

 

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[steelandchrome]

No offense but I am not really sure what you are trying to do with the video? The hook is how to turn $0 into $1000 but you spend like 5 seconds talking about trading hats in a game when it was popular and then you don't know how all of a sudden you are at $1000. If you don't know how you did it then why make the video? Maybe redo with here is how I traded the hats and how I worked that up to $1000 and here is how you can replicate that by following these 3 easy steps or something like that? Then I would kill all the talk about dropshipping etc and focus on just the one thing you want to talk about.

Congrats on taking action, congrats on learning english, congrats on making $1000 from a video game!

Side notes, pick one background and stay with it, the white background was way better. Make sure you don't have the glare on your laptop screen if you want us to see your logo there. I'd remove all the "what was that?" and the spots where you pause and forget what you are saying but that's just me personally.

Best wishes sir!

 

[Fatman0]

No offense but I am not really sure what you are trying to do with the video? The hook is how to turn $0 into $1000 but you spend like 5 seconds talking about trading hats in a game when it was popular and then you don't know how all of a sudden you are at $1000. If you don't know how you did it then why make the video? Maybe redo with here is how I traded the hats and how I worked that up to $1000 and here is how you can replicate that by following these 3 easy steps or something like that? Then I would kill all the talk about dropshipping etc and focus on just the one thing you want to talk about.

Congrats on taking action, congrats on learning english, congrats on making $1000 from a video game!

Side notes, pick one background and stay with it, the white background was way better. Make sure you don't have the glare on your laptop screen if you want us to see your logo there. I'd remove all the "what was that?" and the spots where you pause and forget what you are saying but that's just me personally.

Best wishes sir!

Hey, Id agree with this, but I did previously fortnite videos and I just started doing stuff like this. I just started making these so thats why these thing might be a bit weird. Ill add in a white background next time or just film in my room