Feedback Requested for Blog

[Nubela]

Hey guys, I've recently started a business blog for my startup, here!

Would love to hear feedback and suggestion to improve it! And how should I publicise my blog to more people?

PS: My startup is Gom VPN, a a browser-based, user-friendly VPN that allows you to access blocked websites.

 

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[Nubela]

I have recently written a new blog post about the story of how my startup started here!

Do take a look and let me know of any feedback and suggestions!

 

[Growth & Learn]

I have recently written a new blog post about the story of how my startup started here!

Do take a look and let me know of any feedback and suggestions!

Your english needs some work.

"Here, we inscribe the tales of our journey in building a better way to access the internet."

Sounds like it was written by JR Tolkien. Make it clearer and easier to understand.