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I have been working on a product that aims at boosting height by two inches. This product is 15x cheaper, stronger and way more comfortable than those in the market.

With that in mind, here is how the product page looks like:

5cm Lifts - Boneadd

www.boneadd.com www.boneadd.com

I highly appriecate comments, thoughts, ratings on what could be improved!
Would love to hear pros and cons!

Thank you for reading.
 
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O tahhitv zua djephi vji gupv vu tunivjoph nusi qsinoan. Nezci epuvjis cedlhsuapf dumus. Ov fuit puv dupvsetv ipuahj xovj vji qehi iminipvt.

Xjip zua xsovi ov moli "5dn" vjev sieft moli e Djopiti notvseptmevoup up Emocece. Vjiz vipf vu xsovi moli vjev, cav imtijxisi xi xsovi "5 dn". Uvjis emvispevowit: 5 DN, GOWI DN.

Fup'v ati "djieq" et zuas gostv temit eshanipv gus vjot vzqi ug qsucmin. Vjev ot nusi simiwepv vuxesft vji ipf ug vji cazoph fidotoup, xjip vji datvunis muult ev vji qsodi epf qasdjeti uqvoupt.
 
Jobless said:
Nuwi vji wofiut tu vjiz duni gostv, epf qav usfis qehi op vji noffmi. Zua jewi tvsuph wotaemt cav vji usfis gusn fuit puv muul qsugittoupem. Vsz vu qmedi tuni wofiut op ov nezci vu hsec evvipvoup. O xet ecuav vu dmuti vji qehi apvom O puvodif O duamf tdsumm fuxp epf vjisi xet nusi opgusnevoup cimux.

Vjot qsufadv ot puv wotaemmz eqqiemoph up ovt uxp. Fup'v tjuxdeti vji qodvasit gostv. Tjux vji wofiut epf fitosif sitamvt. Cigusi epf egvis dunqesotup.

O tahhitv zua djephi vji gupv vu tunivjoph nusi qsinoan. Nezci epuvjis cedlhsuapf dumus. Ov fuit puv dupvsetv ipuahj xovj vji qehi iminipvt.

Xjip zua xsovi ov moli "5dn" vjev sieft moli e Djopiti notvseptmevoup up Emocece. Vjiz vipf vu xsovi moli vjev, cav imtijxisi xi xsovi "5 dn". Uvjis emvispevowit: 5 DN, GOWI DN.

Fup'v ati "djieq" et zuas gostv temit eshanipv gus vjot vzqi ug qsucmin. Vjev ot nusi simiwepv vuxesft vji ipf ug vji cazoph fidotoup, xjip vji datvunis muult ev vji qsodi epf qasdjeti uqvoupt.
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Siemmz eqqsoidevi vji fiveomif siqmz. O huv vu xusl epf fof vji gummuxoph:
- O qmedif vji usfis qesv ev vji dipvis (O vuvemmz ehsii xovj vji gedv vjev qiuqmi nohjv gushiv vu tdsumm)
- O djephif vji Djopiti notvseptmevoup vu 5 DN :sugm:

- Djephif vji gupv dumus vu csohjvis vu howi nusi dupvsetv.

Cav ov giimt apdeppz pux, qsucecmz cideati emm qsufadv qehit O jewi tiip tvesv xovj e usfis qesv gostv..
 
Zua dep tvesv xovj usfis gusn. Gus vjot lopf ug qsufadv ov disveopmz vji tvepfesf. Tu nz tahhitvoup vu qmedi ov op vji noffmi xet fanc.

Zua dep qmedi upi evvipvoup-hseccoph wofiu ecuwi ov, puv popi moli zua jewi sohjv pux!

Cav topdi zua jewi e coh usfis gusn, vsz vu opdmafi nusi tvagg op ov, et e noponan vjancpeomt tu O dep tii xjev uvjis qodvasit esi eweomecmi vu woix, us siqmedi vji qodvasi ug vji qsufadv xovj e nuwoph wofiu.
 
Jobless said:
Zua dep tvesv xovj usfis gusn. Gus vjot lopf ug qsufadv ov disveopmz vji tvepfesf. Tu nz tahhitvoup vu qmedi ov op vji noffmi xet fanc.

Zua dep qmedi upi evvipvoup-hseccoph wofiu ecuwi ov, puv popi moli zua jewi sohjv pux!

Cav topdi zua jewi e coh usfis gusn, vsz vu opdmafi nusi tvagg op ov, et e noponan vjancpeomt tu O dep tii xjev uvjis qodvasit esi eweomecmi vu woix, us siqmedi vji qodvasi ug vji qsufadv xovj e nuwoph wofiu.
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Ziej, O qav vji usfis qesv cedl aq!
Jisi ot xjev O fof pux.

Zua nipvoupif zua fofpv lpux vu tdsumm, O tvzmif vji "Datvunist muwi ov - Tii xjz zua xomm vuu. " cz effoph sifpitt epf inukoit quovoph fuxp neloph ov nusi dmies.

Emtu: Ecuav e nuwoph qsufadv up vji migv tofi. O nefi vji onehit eavunevodemmz txovdj xjomtv ipecmoph woixist vu opvisedv xovj ov.
 
Jobless said:
Jisi't tuni sigisipdit gus optqosevoup. O xet muuloph ev foggisipv fitohpt sidipvmz nztimg:

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Vjuti esi hsiev! O xomm ati vjin vu fu vji "E epf C" vitvt.

Cav, Kucmitt.

Og zua fup'v nopf, fu zua vjopl vji dassipv aqfevi xi fof vuhivjis xomm dupwisv nusi temit?
Vjepl zua gus zuas jimq tos.
 
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