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- Mar 25, 2015
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Hi Everyone,
I am a new copywriter who likes to write sales letters. I want to be one of the best, so I am CALLING ALL PEOPLE who know how to write copy. Be very critical and if you like it you can say it as well. I also, have a question: how much would you charge to write a sales letter?
Below is a sales letter that I made up for a fake rental car company named Need-A-Car.
Title: Rent It Before You Buy It
Picture this…you and your friends are packed and ready to go on a road trip. You pick up the rental car and head on down the highway. What is that you feel? What is that you hear? Nothing, but your friends singing a classic road song in the background.
This is the feeling you get when you rent a vehicle from Need-A-Car.
Need-A-Car is proud to be apart of the top three car rental companies in the world. We've received excellent reviews on our car maintenance and performance from thousands of loyal customers around the world.
It gives us great honor to announce Need-A-Car is now selling vehicles! We know that as an expert driver you are concerned about buying a car from a car rental company. However, here are some clear-cut reasons of why you should buy a car from us:
P.S. We are so excited about this new venture that we’re offering our loyal customers a free coupon for a two day rental on any car you would like to buy.
Visit www.needacar.com/buy-car/coupon. Print the coupon and bring it into any Need-A-Car Sale lot near you.
I am a new copywriter who likes to write sales letters. I want to be one of the best, so I am CALLING ALL PEOPLE who know how to write copy. Be very critical and if you like it you can say it as well. I also, have a question: how much would you charge to write a sales letter?
Below is a sales letter that I made up for a fake rental car company named Need-A-Car.
Title: Rent It Before You Buy It
Picture this…you and your friends are packed and ready to go on a road trip. You pick up the rental car and head on down the highway. What is that you feel? What is that you hear? Nothing, but your friends singing a classic road song in the background.
This is the feeling you get when you rent a vehicle from Need-A-Car.
Need-A-Car is proud to be apart of the top three car rental companies in the world. We've received excellent reviews on our car maintenance and performance from thousands of loyal customers around the world.
It gives us great honor to announce Need-A-Car is now selling vehicles! We know that as an expert driver you are concerned about buying a car from a car rental company. However, here are some clear-cut reasons of why you should buy a car from us:
- We have a strict policy of maintenance on our vehicles.
- The vehicles that we sell are two years old or less.
- Our vehicle have less than 50,000 mph on them.
- All of our vehicles are fuel efficient.
- We sell cars, trucks, and vans at low rates.
- We provide financing on all vehicles.
P.S. We are so excited about this new venture that we’re offering our loyal customers a free coupon for a two day rental on any car you would like to buy.
Visit www.needacar.com/buy-car/coupon. Print the coupon and bring it into any Need-A-Car Sale lot near you.
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