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Free registration at the forum removes this block.I also thought the dude covering his face was a little off, sorta gives the impression that he "hates it" because he is covering his face. I really like the card designI'm not a fan of the 3/4 angle photographs. The design remind me of a bar of chocolate. The photograph that is surrounded by the mint green kind of throws me off. Why is the guy covering his face? I get that he is showing off the sculpted abs etc but I think there are better ways to do it.
I'm by no means a profession in this area so take my recommendations with a grain of salt. You are selling meal plans in the first offer right? Why not have a photo of the dude shirtless taking a post workout shake, or better yet have him standing over a blender mixing some shit up.
The second pick makes more sense because you are selling a workout plan. I would ditch the whole card design.
everyone loves chocolateIt doesn't really do much for me. I agree with the others his face is cut off and does look like a chocolate bar.
Ya but what is the point of the design? Is it just here because you like it? Will your customers like it? I would show the face in both pics. Studies show that people respond favorably to photographs that contain faces.I also thought the dude covering his face was a little off, sorta gives the impression that he "hates it" because he is covering his face. I really like the card design
Point of the design is to look like a card that will give you the upperhand in achieving your goalsYa but what is the point of the design? Is it just here because you like it? Will your customers like it? I would show the face in both pics. Studies show that people respond favorably to photographs that contain faces.
For the meal plans photo, why not have a smoking hot girl mixing up some food with a super ripped dude? Make it look like a couples thing.
Point of the design is to look like a card that will give you the upperhand in achieving your goals
I agree on the face thing, thats why i changed it
I'll play around with it, i wanted to do something unique and i havent seen anyone do this in regards to selling meal plans etcCool, just saw the new photo. Looks way better that way IMHO. I'm not trying to rip on you man. Maybe make the design thinner so it resembles the thickness of a card more?
I didn't get it when I looked at it. A card is flat, and has a different ratio (a French playing card should be wider than that). Maybe you could try to change those things and see what comes out.Point of the design is to look like a card that will give you the upperhand in achieving your goals
that looks awesome, ive got an idea. should take me a few minI didn't get it when I looked at it. A card is flat, and has a different ratio (a French playing card should be wider than that). Maybe you could try to change those things and see what comes out.
Also, I saw a deck of cards online for sale once that had a really slick design. It had an image on the card, kind of like yours, but it was slightly oblique. The result was awesome. I'll edit if I can find it for you.
EDIT: Found it.
I remember thinking it was a really good design. Maybe you can get some inspiration.
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The standard poker deck card is 3.5in long and 2.5in wide. I think if you use the same ratio you can get a more "cardy" feeling. Our minds use things like ratios to recognize patterns, far more than symbols like the spade.
i wasnt going for it exactly. just incorporate it slighlyWell ha ha yes, chocolate bars are different than playing cards or credit card style.
Im actually going to add these questions in the description, very good advice. The only problem is that they can be either or. meaning gaining muscle or losing weightIf you can, find a way to quantify the benefits on your product pages, and be specific about how your product will help the customer. I think this is especially true for fitness products, especially when they come at a premium price. People want the important questions answered first. Can you offer them a free preview?
Tailored towards both size and strength
"How much stronger will I get?"
"How much weight can I expect to lose?"
"What will my body fat percentage be?"
"How long do I have to follow this program?"
Reach your goals faster than before
"How much faster? 2x faster? 3x faster?"
I understand that not all of these can be answered since results vary from person to person, but I hope this gives you a good starting point. Look at the popular fitness products, diet plans, and videos like Beachbody's products, for example. Lose ___ fat in ___ days. They lay it out for the customer to eliminate the guess work.
Try green or bright gradient BG and make text look easier to read - Copyright is so tricky, it's almost like you have to start out with paragraphs then condense to a couple of words as much as humanly possible. Almost like structuring keywords to look like sentences!
EDIT: Here's some random copyright off the top of my head that you can go off of:
headline:
NOT EVERYONE
IS CREATED EQUAL
Stop wasting time with generic workouts!
Explode to your goal 10x faster with a custom plan.
-Dominate with size and strength
-Explosive gains on your weakest body parts
-Adonis abs and cardio program
-comprehensive guides: how to execute exercises properly for 0% waste and 100% gains
Sparked some creativity. edited the products
thats my fault, f*cked up the link. thanks for thatI like the clean design, not much I can think of to amend. Only one technical issue:
MY TRANSFORMATION -> CHECK OUT OUR PLANS link is broken (http://btdfitness/custom-plans). Even though the same link from main site (VIEW on the orange bar) is working correctly. Probably some apache url rewriting issue.
$63I feel like something is wrong with them but can't figure out what. Maybe the colours or the pictures...
how much did you pay for your site layout? or theme
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