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- Feb 11, 2019
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Your website is very, very basic which doesn't help you look legitimate but that's not even your main concern...
DOES IT WORK?
AND IS IT SAFE?
I don't have kids but if I did, wouldn't give them a random tea I found on a sketchy-looking online store. If that thing really works, get rid of the banners on your product page and post proof, scientific evidence, research, and testimonials.
Break down each of the benefits, and break down each of the ingredients. What is it, how does it work, what proof is there, how low/high is a safe dosage, and who can verify that?
If the personal story is real, build a landing page too (your main page is super sketchy), base it on your story, and talk about your struggles as a parent and how you overcame them.
It's a great concept (if it works, I don't know) and your personal story (if it's real) could help, but I'd suggest you find every relevant competitor and study their stores.
DOES IT WORK?
AND IS IT SAFE?
I don't have kids but if I did, wouldn't give them a random tea I found on a sketchy-looking online store. If that thing really works, get rid of the banners on your product page and post proof, scientific evidence, research, and testimonials.
Break down each of the benefits, and break down each of the ingredients. What is it, how does it work, what proof is there, how low/high is a safe dosage, and who can verify that?
If the personal story is real, build a landing page too (your main page is super sketchy), base it on your story, and talk about your struggles as a parent and how you overcame them.
It's a great concept (if it works, I don't know) and your personal story (if it's real) could help, but I'd suggest you find every relevant competitor and study their stores.
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