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    Thanks @Xavier X, you are right. I do even have one photo of a normal studio setup, but did not put it on a site. When I have sent the studio website link to some photographers one of them asked, if it is possible to shoot in front of a simple background. I should have immediately reacted...
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    It seems you are always spot on with your ideas :) My first idea was in the first sentence to invite them not to the studio, but to the opening party of the studio. The "problem" is that I intend to send the letter to 400 people and the capacity of the place is around 20-30 people. As I do not...
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    @Ultra Magnus thanks for your time and post. I have read, re-read it more times. After taking your advice I tried to shorten the letter. I also plan to add "testimonials" from photographers (authorities) on the back side of the letter. I have wrote. Re-wrote. Deleted. Wrote. Re-wrote it few...
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    @jon.a I would love to meet them, to know my clients. I was already on the website of ALL of them. I am however a bit scared that it would be quite disturbing for them to knock on everyones door. My letters are really personalized. I have hand written all of the 400 names on the envelope and I...
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    Thanks @Xavier X for your reply. Yes, it would be spam, if I would be sending it out through email, but because it is directly to post box it can not be considered spam (according to my knowledge). This is one of the reasons why I am doing it this way and not just emailing. In this case I...
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    I know you make it harder for new members, but I am not the one who gives up. From the book and also forum it is clear that the focus is on helping. Now it is possible to help to someone who really needs it. Even a small and little help is a big gain for me. Hoping to get response even from...
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    For mixed style photographers: Dear .... As a chairman of B.......Studio allow me to invite you to the most unique photo studio in Wien which was specially built for hochzeit, family, portrait and menschen photogaphy. You will probably agree weddings does not always takes place on nice...
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    For WEDDING: Dear .... As a chairman of B....Studio allow me to invite you to the most unique photo studio in Wien which was specially built for hochzeit (wedding) photographers. You will probably agree weddings does not always takes place in a nice location where it easy to make beautiful...
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    First of all thank you very much for building this forum to everyone who contributed in some way to make this place so helpful. What I need is your advice, your observation, your input what can be done better. What I think is maybe a contribution on my side is that someone can read the thread...
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    Welcome from Wien - Bratislava - Prague

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    Today I discovered the forum, started reading "THE" book and joined. I went to one university when I was 18. After a year decided it is not for me despite having all my exams. Going to another school and doing a Bc. degree (in EU after 3 years in high school you get this degree). Instead of...

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