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Recent content by Edd--19

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    Critique My Website

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    @Black_Dragon43 & @BizyDad I'm going to go for a hybrid of your 2 approaches you're discussing. Reason being, I'm a complete novice and I have no idea what works and need to find out what does. I agree with @Black_Dragon43 that the arena of online selling has evolved and having more control...
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    Critique My Website

    EXECUTION 
    Thanks @daivey, @OneLife, @BizyDad, and @Black_Dragon43 for reviewing my site. I've put my response into one message for ease of traversing.You can skip down to the bit with your quotes, look for you tagged name. @daivey About Us Page: It reads terribly as it was 9pm last night when I wrote...
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    Critique My Website

    EXECUTION 
    I take them straight to the product page. None of this long winded, let them flail around my website stuff. One of the main issues I had (using shopify) was that there was too much clutter on my checkout pages. I now force everyone to buy everything as a guest to streamline it (remember Ford's...
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    Critique My Website

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    Thanks for taking a look, I've jotted down on my to do list that I need to give my brand more oomph. I was originally dropshipping, but I found the lead times horrendous for the UK, I had a couple of orders and they took a month and a half to arrive (if they did) and had to refund the...
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    Critique My Website

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    Thanks, Dan. I've applied your suggestions about having an about us page and adding in my address for the store. I was initially hesitant as I didn't want to brandish it about but... realistically, how many people are going to show up? Zero. I'll add the fizz into the product descriptions...
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    Critique of outreach email for counseling services

    One way is to add a first time discount code. Another would be to create a seperate email address that you can put as the email contact. From here just simple ratios. Send 100 letters/emails. 10 Show interest. 2 convert. These are 2 ways that I may try (especially the latter if I didn't want...
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    Critique of outreach email for counseling services

    Happy to help. Come to think of it, a better solution for you might be to try split testing your letter and tracking the results to see which iterations perform better. Who knows, you may decide to keep with this marketing strategy in the future as it allows you to approach more people to help...
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    Business Idea;Tell us want you want to buy!

    IDEA 
    Looking at it from both sides. Positives: - Can connect to local buyers/sellers and support local commerce (e.g. butchers, greengrocers...) - No opportunity to be influenced by upsells, cross sells, ads etc... - You can build a local network and learn more about the good parts of your...
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    Critique of outreach email for counseling services

    I've read the letter and it reads well. I don't believe I'm properly qualified to give any advice on sales letters or the likes but I did notice a few things that you can improve. - I read a copywriting book (by Bob bly) and he says that the most important part of your copy is your headline...
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    Warren Buffett's genius lies apparently in character not just in intellectual horsepower

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    I was speaking with my step-dad some time ago. He's done well with his pension and retired a few years ago with £1.2 million from some good investments. We were talking about whether we would invest in Facebook. I answered no and he shared with me that one of the investors he follows (I can't...
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    Kevin O’ Leary says investing $100 a week will make you a millionaire by retirement

    HOT! 
    The hypocrasy is ridiculous. I'll be happy to sell him my build your business Ebook for $497. I gurantee this is all based on my experience of watching everyone else build a business.
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    Critique My Website

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    Hey Fastlaners, I have been hitting a problem with converting users into buyers. I can convert people from my ads fairly easily over to my web page, however many people will add to cart and then vanish. I am certain that something I am doing is stifling my attempts to convert people. I'd...
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    How I reduced the amount of time I waste online

    MINDSET 
    I love LeechBlock NG. Such a strong add on to use! I've never tried it your way but will give it a go it sounds like a great way to get back to productivity
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    HELP ME TO BECOME A REAL WEB DESIGNER WITH OPEN SOURCE CHANNES

    INTRO 
    Woah, woah, woah, Sumit. Calm down on the Caps Locks! It looks like you're shouting at us. I'm currently using w3schools.com to learn HTML and other web technologies and aim to move into Java when I feel comfortable with the core 3 (HTML, CSS, & JavaScript). You should check them out. If it's...
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    [GUIDE] Facebook Ads Made Simple (That Even Your Mom Can Understand) 2019 Edition

    NOTABLE! SOCIAL MEDIA MARKETING 
    Read it. Loved it. Bumping it. Great advice for anyone who wants to learn more about Facebook Marketing and still relevant in 2020. Thanks for all the extra tips!
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