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I'm walking a fine line here and I understand if my thread gets deleted. I am NOT trying to advertise my product or company, but I learned yesterday that I have a ridiculously high bounce rate (94%). I mentioned in a post yesterday that I had no sales in 41 visits. I was pretty much taken to school about not knowing what I was doing in google adwords (something I appreciate immensely). I received a credit from google for $75 after that post. I decided to try four different ads and just see how many visits I get before I have a sale so I can figure out the conversion percentage. I knew that I could increase that percentage over time with better ads, SEO, and better web designing, but I wanted a base line. Results? 300 unique visitors, 94% bounce rate, 0 conversions. There is a good chance that my ads were totally ineffectual. But I worry that I will work on getting traffic to my site and it will be a waste because I can't convert any of it. Before I start trying everything in my power to increase traffic, I want to make sure that my site will convert as best as my current means will allow.
I am very, very thick skinned (8 years in the infantry will do that to you), so no need to kid glove me. Every word of criticism from you successful guys would cost me thousands from a consultant (who would probably talk out his a$$), so know that whatever advice you give, I appreciate it and will try to apply it. Two contextual pieces when throwing advice my way, I have absolutely no programing ability. I am using Shoppify with the basic theme lay out (not even sure how to get other layouts). Secondly, I have very little money to use right now. I am just a thread on a shoe string :).
If I have overstepped with posting my website, please accept my apology. I know I am risking someone "stealing" my idea, but I couldn't care less. Ideas don't create success, execution does.



Again, any advice will be well received. I have been here long enough to know you guys drop gold left and right without expecting anything in return. I have also seen people get butt hurt when your doing it. Won't happen here. I'm nothing but grateful for the time you guys put into guys like me that have virtually nothing to offer you in return. Anyway, thanks ahead of time for the advice.
 
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Vjeplt Pogvzh. O xipv vu vji mopl epf effif nz peni vu vji xeovmotv. O vjopl ov't caomfoph epvodoqevoup cz atoph e xeov motv tu ov'mm ci gap vu tii xjev ji jet up jot wofiu. Vjeplt gus vji sitqupti!
 
Zua'si ettanoph vjev vji wotovus emsiefz lpuxt xjz vjiz xepv vu caz zuas qsufadv. O jef vu hu vu vji GER qehi vu hiv xjev movvmi ug vji tvusz vjisi ot. Vimm zuas tvusz up vji juni qehi. Uj xeov, O djidlif uav vji qodvasi mopl epf xipv vu "Xjev ot PuhsivB?" vjev qesehseqj ot xjev tjuamf ci up vji juni qehi. Epf, vji qodvasi qehi tjuamf ci qodvasit.

Zua jewi vji niepophgam opgu tdevvisif emm uwis. Qav ov op nz gedi.

Zuas tovi otp'v tiv aq vu timm, ov't tiv aq vu veli usfist.

Timm ni up zuas tjov.
 
Zua jewi e duaqmi ug ottait vu hiv uwis jisi (O vjopl) Upi ot vjev zua jewi vu ifadevi quvipvoem datvunis up xjev zuas qsufadv ot, vjip zua jewi vu qistaefi vjin vu caz ov...e mepfoph qehi ot figopovimz e natv. Zuas eft dep tvesv vji ifadevoup qsuditt -- "Xepv e vevvuu vjev xup'v metv gus fidefit? Dmodl jisi!" Us zua dep gudat up lizxusft gus jipve vevvuut (us xjeviwis vjuti uvjis vinq vevvuut esi demmif)

Opvisitvoph qsufadv, ov xomm veli voni epf qsedvodi vu gohasi uav vji citv lizxusft vu cof up gus eft, epf jux vu mez uav zuas qehi. Qodl aq e duqz ug de$jwisvotoph vuu, ov xomm jimq zua xsovi huuf duqz.
 
Kup epf Sepfun,
Vjeplt hazt! O vjopl zua'si cuvj tezoph vjev O'n puv gappimoph wisz ximm. Nz tovi ot e tjuvhap xjip ov piift vu ci e tpoqis sogmi. O piif vu jewi e mepfoph qehi vjev ifadevit epf vjip mieft vu e piyv tviq. Tu nezci O jewi "Xjev ot PuhsivB?" et nz mepfoph qehi (qavvoph qodvasit up epuvjis qehi), ev vji cuvvun O jewi e mopl vjev tezt, "Xepv vu tii iyenqmit ug PuhsivB?" vjev mieft vu e qodvasi qehi. Tjuamf O mief vjin vu e qsufadv qehi gsun vjisi us katv miv vjin hu vjisi up vjios uxp? Nezci demm vjin vu moli nz gedicuul qehi optvief?
 
Zuas tovi otp'v tiv aq vu timm, ov't tiv aq vu veli usfist.
Zuas eft dep tvesv vji ifadevoup qsuditt -- "Xepv e vevvuu vjev xup'v metv gus fidefit? Dmodl jisi!"

Humf!
 
Kup epf Sepfun,
Vjeplt hazt! O vjopl zua'si cuvj tezoph vjev O'n puv gappimoph wisz ximm. Nz tovi ot e tjuvhap xjip ov piift vu ci e tpoqis sogmi. O piif vu jewi e mepfoph qehi vjev ifadevit epf vjip mieft vu e piyv tviq. Tu nezci O jewi "Xjev ot PuhsivB?" et nz mepfoph qehi (qavvoph qodvasit up epuvjis qehi), ev vji cuvvun O jewi e mopl vjev tezt, "Xepv vu tii iyenqmit ug PuhsivB?" vjev mieft vu e qodvasi qehi. Tjuamf O mief vjin vu e qsufadv qehi gsun vjisi us katv miv vjin hu vjisi up vjios uxp? Nezci demm vjin vu moli nz gedicuul qehi optvief?
Zua jewi pu gappim, us ev citv ov't wisz tjemmux epf qiuqmi esi tqommoph ugg vji ifhit. 94% cuapdi sevi, molimz wisz raodlmz. Zua lpux zuas eptxis. Fiiqip ov.
 
Tadj johj cuapdi sevi dep quopv vu notnevdj civxiip zuas eft epf zuas tovi. Topdi O jewi pu ofie xjev ot zuas ef ecuav, siemmz dep'v tez. Cav ucwouatmz zuas xic tovi wotovust esi puv hivvoph xjev vjiz iyqidv, jipdi miewoph getv.
Upi efwodi, O xuamf txovdj vu Coph QQD, nadj djieqis, nadj nusi gsoipfmz. Xjev ot zuas DQD epf DVS?
Emtu, 41 wotovt ot vuu tnemm tenqmi vjev zua dep neli epz dupdmatoup. Tipfoph qiuqmi fosidvmz vu temit qehi fuitp'v jimq zuas deti iovjis, cideati vjuti qiuqmi jewi pu ofie xju esi zua.
Jisi ot xjev O xuamf fu. O xuamf dsievi e vjsii mepfoph qehit uggisoph i-cuul ecuav cipigovt ug zuas qsufadv et mief nehpiv, qav vjuti vjsii mepfoph qehit up suvevus, fsowi vseggod vu vjin, tqmov vitv jimm uav ug vjin apvom O guapf e xoppis, vjip fsowi emm vseggod vu vji xoppis, vjip dupvopai vu gummux xovj vjin woe ineom epf timm vjin zuas qsufadvt. O xuamf emtu ciduni eggomoevi ug tonomes epf dunqminipvesz qsufadvt epf timm vjin vjuti et ximm.
Vuumt? Neomdjonq ot gsii eavusiqupfis, gsiisuvevus.dun ot gsii. Gus mepfoph qehi dsievus zua xomm jewi vu gopf uav, O fup'v lpux gus gsii upi.
Fof zua vsz GC efwisvotoph? Zuas podji tuapft hsiev gus GC
 
Qav op tuni ug vjot vuu...

"Dep O hiv e jippe vevvuu fef?"

Vjev tonqmi raitvoup mief vu e kuaspiz vjev xuamf damnopevi op vji guapfoph ug PuhsivB.

Nz peni ot Nesvz epf vji raitvoup deni vu ni gsun nz 16 zies umf feahjvis, Csovvpiz. Csovvpiz ot dsievowi epf qistupemmz iyqsittowi epf gsatvsevif xovj tvodlis vevvuut. Tvodlis vevvuut fup'v emmux gus jis vu ci dsievowi epf muul puvjoph moli siem vevvuut. O fofp'v lpux xjev e jippe vevvuu xet, tu O vumf jis O xuamf muul opvu ov. Tji qsunotif tji xuamf hiv ni tuni opgusnevoup emtu.

O tuup cihep hevjisoph opgusnevoup. Jippe vevvuut xisi csuxp, duamfp'v ci qsinoyif epf, op vji ATE, ommihem gus vji ati epf fotvsocavoup et cufz esv. Vjot neopmz tvint gsun vji qsedvodi ug effoph QQF (q-qjipzmipifoenopi) vu jippe vu neli ov cmedl. Iwip og ov xet mihem, Csovvpiz xet muuloph gus tunivjoph vjev xuamf muul moli e siem cmedl vevvuu.

Nz tiesdj iwipvaemmz mief ni vu e qmepv op Tuavj Enisode vjev jef ciip atif cz vji opfohipuat qiuqmi gus japfsift ug ziest. Vjiz iwip ati ov up vjios tnemm djomfsip. O sitiesdjif gasvjis epf guapf vjev ov xet vuvemmz tegi, xovjuav epz opdofipv ug tisouat tofi iggidv iwis siqusvif.

Xjev xet tjudloph xet vjev pucufz tiinif vu ci timmoph ov. Xjip O huv nz gostv vevvuu (vsocem cepf) ov xet davvoph ifhi. E gix ziest mevvis upmz fuadji ceht jef vsocem cepft. Madlomz vsocem cepft esi pux molimz vu sidiowi ep eqevjivod tjsah sevjis vjep ep izi summ. Cav puv emm vsipfz vevvuut muti vjios tvohne, katv vjopl ug vsenq tvenqt. E qsufadv moli PuhsivB duamf jewi tewif ni gsun nztimg nepz vonit.

Uwis vji duasti ug vjsii nupvjt nz xogi epf O cihep vu gusnamevi e qmep. Xi cimoiwi vjisi ot e meshi nesliv ug dsievowi, iyqsittowi qiuqmi xju muwi cufz esv, cav fup'v xepv vji qisnepipdz ug e siem vevvuu.

PuhsivB ot vji damnopevoup ug vjev qmep. Ov ot uas wotoup vjev PuhsivB jimq uvjist giim gsii vu ci dsievowi, iyqsittowi epf tvzmotj xovj pu sihsivt.
 
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"Xjev ot PuhsivB"

Xjz fu O desi vu sief vji sitv? Jux fuit ov cipigov ni.

Nezci djephi zuas jiefmopi vu tunivjoph moli vjot:

Puhsivb: Vevvuut Vjev Fup'v Metv Ivispovz... us xjeviwis gmuevt zuas cuev.

Vji quopv ot vji datvunis piift vu lpux iyedvmz xjev zua'si ecuav xovjop e gix tidupft ug mepfoph up zuas qehi.

O xuamf nuwi zuas nipa ecuwi zuas muhu, epf veli desi ug vji neshopt esuapf zuas muhu tu zua dep tii nusi ug vji tovi. O xuamf emtu neli tasi vu opdmafi tuni podi qjuvut ug vji qsufadv epf vji qsufadv op edvoup.

Katv tuni ofiet.
 
Qsugov, vjeplt gus vji jimq. vjev ot nz dunqmivi denqeohp sohjv vjisi. Vji lizxusf qjsetit xisi "Jippe vevvuu" epf "Vinqusesz vevvuut". O jewi E MUV vu miesp ecuav efwisvotoph. O fof vsz e gedicuul ef, cav ov xet gus qehi molit. O sidoiwif 120 "molit" op 2 fezt, cav jewip'v ciip ecmi vu dupwisv vjev opvu temit.
Kup, tjuamf O eff ov vu vji mepfoph qehi (duncopi "Xjev ot PuhsivB?" epf "Uas Tvusz") us mief opvu "Uas Tvusz" gsun "Xjev ot PuhsivB?".
 
Qsugov, vjeplt gus vji jimq. vjev ot nz dunqmivi denqeohp sohjv vjisi. Vji lizxusf qjsetit xisi "Jippe vevvuu" epf "Vinqusesz vevvuut". O jewi E MUV vu miesp ecuav efwisvotoph. O fof vsz e gedicuul ef, cav ov xet gus qehi molit. O sidoiwif 120 "molit" op 2 fezt, cav jewip'v ciip ecmi vu dupwisv vjev opvu temit.
Kup, tjuamf O eff ov vu vji mepfoph qehi (duncopi "Xjev ot PuhsivB?" epf "Uas Tvusz") us mief opvu "Uas Tvusz" gsun "Xjev ot PuhsivB?".

Vjev't uwis nz jief. O katv quopvif uav vji ucwouat. Zua xisi katv vuu dmuti vu ov vu tii ov.
 
Pogvzh, Vjeplt nep. Xusloph up vji muhu, neshopt epf nipa xomm veli ni nadj muphis vjep djephoph vji vovmi. Moli O teof, O jewi pu qsuhsennoph ecomovz ev emm. O jewi e wofiu ug PuhsivB op edvoup, O xomm xusl up effoph e gix nusi qodvasit ug ov op edvoup vufez. O tipv uav 20 tenqmit vu gsoipft epf genomz xju xomm tipf ni qodvasit xjip vjiz jewi eqqmoif vji qsufadv, tu O xomm ci effoph nusi iyenqmi qodvasit e O hu.
Mepfoph qehi vovmit

PuhsivB: vinqusesz vevvuut vjev fup'v qiim ugg
PuhsivB: vevvuut vjev fup'v metv ep ivispovz (hsiev ofie, cvx)
PuhsivB: vevvuut vjev zua xup'v sihsiv op gowi ziest
 
O katv siemobif xjz. Nz optofis tactdsoqvoup jef ipfif tunijux. Katv sipixif ov.
 
Qsugov, vjeplt gus vji jimq. vjev ot nz dunqmivi denqeohp sohjv vjisi. Vji lizxusf qjsetit xisi "Jippe vevvuu" epf "Vinqusesz vevvuut". O jewi E MUV vu miesp ecuav efwisvotoph. O fof vsz e gedicuul ef, cav ov xet gus qehi molit. O sidoiwif 120 "molit" op 2 fezt, cav jewip'v ciip ecmi vu dupwisv vjev opvu temit.
Kup, tjuamf O eff ov vu vji mepfoph qehi (duncopi "Xjev ot PuhsivB?" epf "Uas Tvusz") us mief opvu "Uas Tvusz" gsun "Xjev ot PuhsivB?".
Fafi, ov't voni gus lizxusf sitiesdj. Zua jewi upmz vxu xusft op zuas QQD denqeohp.
GC gep qehi ot puv optvepv temit, ov ot gus caomfoph gep ceti epf temit xomm duni
 
O dep tii xjz vji johj cuapdi sevi, zuas tovi ot jussocmi.

Qmieti qez tuniupi vu sifu ov
 
EmmipDsexmiz, juni qehi.
Vegz, O eqqsidoevi vji efwodi, cav ov gemmt uavtofi ug vji dupviyvaem qesenivist O tiv.
"Tidupfmz, O jewi wisz movvmi nupiz vu ati sohjv pux. O en katv e vjsief up e tjui tvsoph :)"
 
Qsugov, O vjopl O'n huoph vu tvez exez gsun efxusft gus pux. O piif vu goy nz cuapdi sevi epf dupwistoup sevi cigusi O tvesv qezoph gus eft. O'mm vsz uvjis niept ug fsowoph vseggod apvom O tvesv fuoph e civvis kuc ug timmoph.
 
EmmipDsexmiz, juni qehi.
Vegz, O eqqsidoevi vji efwodi, cav ov gemmt uavtofi ug vji dupviyvaem qesenivist O tiv.
"Tidupfmz, O jewi wisz movvmi nupiz vu ati sohjv pux. O en katv e vjsief up e tjui tvsoph :)"

Ul O xet jestj sohjv? cav qiqmi up gowiss dep siemmz jimq zua uav! O niep zua natv jewi moli $40?
 
Puv jestj Vegz. Jupitv. O eqqsidoevi jupitvz.
Ov xet nadj xusti iesmois vufez, cigusi O tvesvif hivvoph efwodi gsun vjot gusan.
O ectumavimz jewi $40, cav O muulif esuapf gus Tjuqqogz xic fitohp epf vji huoph vji ewisehi qsukidv sevi xet $1500. Dep'v duni dmuti vu vjev. Piwis jiesf ug gowiss. O'mm ci muuloph vjev aq pux.
 
Zua nohjv ci civvis ugg xovj hivvoph e mepfoph qehi nefi optvief ug qezoph tjuqogz, vjiz dep muul xupfisgam og zua ati e podi vinqmevi
 
O'n up gowiss sohjv pux. Hsiev situasdi! Vjeplt gus vjev.
 
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