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  1. Gymjunkie

    What are your hobbies?

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    Reading books Working out in the Gym (and sports in general..) Photoshop graphic design Music Movies Would love to do some surfing, photography and traveling around USA! ;)
  2. Gymjunkie

    Please Critic My Landing Page

    I am talking from design point of view now: it's too busy. Too little white space in between the headlines, subheadlines and bullet points. Make them a bit more spaced out (make bullet points smaller font).It gives a structure to design and is easier to read. P.S. I'll take you up on that ad...
  3. Gymjunkie

    What book are you reading? Right now. Post up!

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    Haha..couldn't finish it too.. 20 euros wasted.. wish I had bought Cashvertising instead...
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    Please Critic My Landing Page

    Simple doesn't mean short necessarily. Just like in my thread, you can write up a shorter, better more to the point version of sales page.. Plus, on internet people are very lazy, have very short attention span and don't want to scroll down the page. That's the difference. Now long form sales...
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    Please Critic My Landing Page

    Screams at me too much personally! I like to keep landing pages simple and easy. Look at the page in my sig, just been advised by this forum and improved it. I'd prefer to see your page with more graphics, not more red text. I'd change your page structure to have your opt-in form as close to the...
  6. Gymjunkie

    Redesigned site. Need your opinion! ;)

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    Big thanks Mike and others who challenged me to improve the site with their comments! Still got a blog to add I guess but it's good to see people say site progresses.
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    Redesigned site. Need your opinion! ;)

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    Ok, added another update on this. Made the image in the background darker to ease the reading and made the pitch more exact. I'd say even offensive for some! Here it is: ''Need a few tips on how to get rid of those love handles or man-boobs ? Or maybe you want to add 20lbs to your 90-pound...
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    Redesigned site. Need your opinion! ;)

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    1. Once a week we send a newsletter. 2. There are no newsletter like this except one direct competitor. Other sites have newsletters that send affiliate offers, upsells and some articles. This newsletter is a timesaver which aggregates best articles AND includes one or few original tips from...
  9. Gymjunkie

    Redesigned site. Need your opinion! ;)

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    Great post! The problem with targeting is I only target guys who are 16-45 years old, that's it. I'm casting a wide net. Sites like this, or should I say newsletters target more by location (Thrillist.com) or interest (Idealbite - going 'green', UrbanDaddy.com or Vitaljuice.com - fitness and...
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    Redesigned site. Need your opinion! ;)

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    I really find it strange that its tough to read... must be my monitor cuz it looks fine, light font on dark background. Hmm...I need to see it on few more monitors. Maybe I just lower the brightness of the image on the background and that will bring out the text.. Thank you! And thanx a mil for...
  11. Gymjunkie

    Just launched my Fastlane biz & Intro

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    Don't be sure about it... some of your friends wont even give it a listen, won't even share with friends of theirs... much less pay for it.. that is my experience so far..
  12. Gymjunkie

    Redesigned site. Need your opinion! ;)

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    How did you determine that? I've visited tons of dark sites, grunge type is very popular making it rougher.. I would agree that maybe Health sites as in disease, women's stuff etc are generally light... but this site is for guys ;) It's a very interesting insight tho, expand please, maybe I'm...
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    Redesigned site. Need your opinion! ;)

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    Awesome tips man, thank you! Speed+ Getting sleepy now but gonna read up some advice on writing copy and apply tips from you guys here and get new design up tomorrow.
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    Redesigned site. Need your opinion! ;)

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    No you are absolutely fine! English is my 2nd language so no wonder I do mistakes... Thanks for pointing out there are ones! It's important to have a professional text. I think I have to rewrite sentences differently.. Speed+
  15. Gymjunkie

    Must Read: 2 Resource Websites for Web Start ups

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    Sup guys, been browsing two great websites for website start ups. Andrew Chen (@andrewchen) is about how to build audience, customer acquisition costs and is it worth it, here a couple: “Anyone can start a Groupon!” and other startup myths | Andrew Chen (@andrewchen) When Does Paid...
  16. Gymjunkie

    Questions for my new online business

    WEB/DIGITAL 
    Read up a site like Landing Page and Conversion Optimization Blog | Unbounce they feature tons of info about landing pages and tips on how to improve conversions on a web site. Study them and it should help you. Maybe stress convenience of your product more, if you had a video showing how to...
  17. Gymjunkie

    Redesigned site. Need your opinion! ;)

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    It is basically a landing page, About page and that's it. No more than that, goal is to get people to subscribe to newsletter. Do you work out? The message won't resonate with anyone who hasn't been working out in the gym. I actually hope it's love/hate reaction to it, because good sales copy...
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    Redesigned site. Need your opinion! ;)

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    I don't think he got it because of how he worded the comment.. not saying anything about others... I will either add a blog with some posts or a short free ebook with helpful info. I'm mad now because people need so much convincing to join what will help them!! lol
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    Redesigned site. Need your opinion! ;)

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    Hmm..seems to me you didn't get the main idea behind this.. there is no website, there is just email newsletter where we send tips once a week to your email..I should rewrite it again to make it more clear. :) @Black Cheers, I guess I will be adding a blog with couple of posts with good advice...
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    Redesigned site. Need your opinion! ;)

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    Spelling wrong? (English is not my first language) Appreciate criticism guys! ;)

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