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  1. Cruor Vult

    {PROGRESS + ACCOUNTABILITY} LAURYN'S RECONSTRUCTION: GETTING TO 50 SHADES OF PAID

    PUBLISHING 
    Nice. That's pretty good confirmation that your writing is good. I imagine that at this relatively early stage in your writing career, it can be good to have a publisher to speed you along. I hope it turns out to be a good experience for you. Though I almost hope you will return to self...
  2. Cruor Vult

    {PROGRESS + ACCOUNTABILITY} LAURYN'S RECONSTRUCTION: GETTING TO 50 SHADES OF PAID

    PUBLISHING 
    Precisely. Life experience is vital for good writing. These things are difficult now, but they're money in the bank for a writer. Remember how you used your real experiences to write Ricochet? Didn't turn out too shabbily, did it?
  3. Cruor Vult

    PISSED off that I was fed the slowlane LIES

    SLOWLANE 
    ICK speaks the truth as always.
  4. Cruor Vult

    {PROGRESS + ACCOUNTABILITY} LAURYN'S RECONSTRUCTION: GETTING TO 50 SHADES OF PAID

    PUBLISHING 
    You should write thrillers. You sure have the technique down.
  5. Cruor Vult

    [PROGRESS THREAD] ChickenHawk's Self-Published Fiction EBooks

    GOLD! 
    Talk about a thrilling and inspiring thread. So just a lifetime of writing plus six months of intense work for overnight success... seems like you just had to get in the Fastlane to release the potential :) Thanks for letting us follow your every step.
  6. Cruor Vult

    I've Read The Millionaire Fastlane!

    GOLD! HOT! 
    Read the book. Twice in a week. Third time now, taking notes. Just blown away by the ideas in there. This is more than inspirational, it's a roadmap to your dreams.
  7. Cruor Vult

    {PROGRESS + ACCOUNTABILITY} LAURYN'S RECONSTRUCTION: GETTING TO 50 SHADES OF PAID

    PUBLISHING 
    I don't doubt any of her feelings, she is obviously very genuine. But she's only human (or sort of, anyway :) ), and I think you bring that across very well by letting us see things from Travis' perspective. Nice :)
  8. Cruor Vult

    {PROGRESS + ACCOUNTABILITY} LAURYN'S RECONSTRUCTION: GETTING TO 50 SHADES OF PAID

    PUBLISHING 
    My pleasure :) Note: Spoilers below! Of course. Travis (to me) comes across as a very decent man who treats his wife extremely well, except that his addiction gets her down and ruins their entire marriage - but that also has a lot to do with Carmen's reaction to it. It's not like he beats her...
  9. Cruor Vult

    {PROGRESS + ACCOUNTABILITY} LAURYN'S RECONSTRUCTION: GETTING TO 50 SHADES OF PAID

    PUBLISHING 
    Read the story and posted a review on Amazon (it has to be reviewed by them before it goes live, I think). Very good and vivid writing. Very believable, with little details that make it easy to picture Carmen and her surroundings. I really like the part where she goes to the cloud. I was...
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