Recent content by Jessica
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First try at copywriting, helping a friend. Feedback wanted!
MARKETINGI think your copy is good. But, I think you should give more benefits than "hype". I mean your telling me to buy this car but, your not really telling me why I need it in my life. You're not appealing to my emotions. Who are you aiming this car to? What are you offering me besides the car...- Jessica
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I Need Everyone To Critique My Sales Letter Part 2
MARKETINGHello Everyone...again, I really received a lot of great advice on my last sales letter. I decided to go with a website that was established (DennisDuty's advice) It's name: pinkblushmaternity.com. I also, have taken some ideas from my two favorite copywriters Gary Halbert and Chris Haddad...- Jessica
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Sales Letter Talk: Reader’s Digest Sweepstakes Letter
MARKETINGWhat do you all think about one of my favorite copywriting sales letters? I like this sales letter because the first time I read it, I was surprised of how the writer put a $250,000.00 sweepstakes in the same letter with "Jim Nabors Sings" album. Its like two different letters but, it works...- Jessica
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I Need Everyone To Critique My Sales Letter
MARKETINGThanks Everyone, for giving your honest opinions on my work. Its going to make me a better writer. In a couple of weeks,I will have another sales letter for you'll to critique. I think every beginner copywriter should use this method of learning the craft. Reading books on copywriting is very...- Jessica
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I Need Everyone To Critique My Sales Letter
MARKETINGThanks for the kind words. My biggest problem is being detailed in my story telling and making sure I don't confuse features as benefits.- Jessica
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I Need Everyone To Critique My Sales Letter
MARKETINGI just subscribed to your youtube channel and I think your funny for putting up the Office video.- Jessica
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I Need Everyone To Critique My Sales Letter
MARKETINGThanks a lot, you gave me a lot of great advice!- Jessica
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I Need Everyone To Critique My Sales Letter
MARKETINGThanks- Jessica
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I Need Everyone To Critique My Sales Letter
MARKETINGHi Everyone, I am a new copywriter who likes to write sales letters. I want to be one of the best, so I am CALLING ALL PEOPLE who know how to write copy. Be very critical and if you like it you can say it as well. I also, have a question: how much would you charge to write a sales letter...- Jessica
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