User Power
Value/Post Ratio
329%
- Aug 9, 2015
- 486
- 1,599
The below might sound over critical, but just wanted to give a honest appraisal as a first time visitor hitting the site.
When I arrive at the site, I don't know where to look. First my eye is drawn to the image on the left and then to the text on the right and back again, giving me no time to be really drawn in to either side and be really won over by the offering.
If you look at Sports Nutrition | Bodybuilding & Sports Supplements - CSN (I appreciate its not your niche, but was the first sport supplement related Shopify store I came across), that focuses on one single thing - promoting the product via an image and text. They could do better by making their text more benefit than features focused but it does entice me more than your page does.
The videos also don't feel like they make sense being straight after the header. It feels like I've being sold at hard when I just want to browse around the store a little before the shop assistant comes up behind me and tries to sell me. I'd have the products first then the videos below (or even maybe just one and push them to an educational section on the site to see more).
The products also could do with more information. If I don't know about the products already then I'm unlikely to just randomly click on one. Have a few lines of the description after the product title telling me it's the bestseller that has had exceptional results for golfers who took it over 6 weeks.
I love how willing you are to ask for advice and truly wish you success with it all. If You need clarification on any of this let me know and I'll do my best to help!
When I arrive at the site, I don't know where to look. First my eye is drawn to the image on the left and then to the text on the right and back again, giving me no time to be really drawn in to either side and be really won over by the offering.
If you look at Sports Nutrition | Bodybuilding & Sports Supplements - CSN (I appreciate its not your niche, but was the first sport supplement related Shopify store I came across), that focuses on one single thing - promoting the product via an image and text. They could do better by making their text more benefit than features focused but it does entice me more than your page does.
The videos also don't feel like they make sense being straight after the header. It feels like I've being sold at hard when I just want to browse around the store a little before the shop assistant comes up behind me and tries to sell me. I'd have the products first then the videos below (or even maybe just one and push them to an educational section on the site to see more).
The products also could do with more information. If I don't know about the products already then I'm unlikely to just randomly click on one. Have a few lines of the description after the product title telling me it's the bestseller that has had exceptional results for golfers who took it over 6 weeks.
I love how willing you are to ask for advice and truly wish you success with it all. If You need clarification on any of this let me know and I'll do my best to help!