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There's not a single word in your post about who you serve, and what needs and wants they have that you are well equipped to fulfill.
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Free registration at the forum removes this block.He that blooms late, thanks for pointing out that oversight. I've updated the post accordingly. Hadn't wanted to make it so long.There's not a single word in your post about who you serve, and what needs and wants they have that you are well equipped to fulfill.
Thanks for that. I'm indeed aware of the Nigerian trust effect, will take off that testimonial.In all honesty, I think if you want to gather more trust, you need to remove the testimony from the guy from Nigeria. Unfortunately (as I'm sure you know), the trust declines. I really encourage you to give away a few copies of your eBook with the cavet that you can use a persons review on your page.
Thanks a lot for the feedback!I don’t know what the hell online transcription is.
And you definitely didn’t explain it on that page.
You gotta add a video of YOU going into detail about the “who, what, when, where & why” of your product.
I’m viewing your page on my iPhone and the text is all screwed up. Fix that.
Add some pics of you or something related to your product that break up the text.
He that blooms late, thanks for pointing out that oversight. I've updated the post accordingly. Hadn't wanted to make it so long.
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