The website itself seems good but it's too wordy and doesn't communicate well what you are selling.
People don't want to build a contact list, they want to get the contact info a person they need to talk to. They don't care about how many people are on linkedin, and they don't care about how your software works.
Use the website to tell them how this benefits them, tell them they will be able to close their sales by getting in contact with the decision makers they need. Tell them this is how they can bypass the gatekeepers and secretaries. Speak to the people who will be using it and think like them.
Completely focus this page on getting them to sign up for the free trial, don't explain to them how to use the software on this page. When they sign up direct them to a page that explains how to use the software and download it.
You don't want to overload them with information.
Hope this helps!
People don't want to build a contact list, they want to get the contact info a person they need to talk to. They don't care about how many people are on linkedin, and they don't care about how your software works.
Use the website to tell them how this benefits them, tell them they will be able to close their sales by getting in contact with the decision makers they need. Tell them this is how they can bypass the gatekeepers and secretaries. Speak to the people who will be using it and think like them.
Completely focus this page on getting them to sign up for the free trial, don't explain to them how to use the software on this page. When they sign up direct them to a page that explains how to use the software and download it.
You don't want to overload them with information.
Hope this helps!