Need to have an UNSCRIPTED presentation for my SCRIPTED college (English exam)

[Alxander]

Currently finishing college and will give a presentation about entrepreneurship cause I could choose anything I wanted. (like in life lol). It only needs to be 5-10 minutes long so it's gotta be in the fastlane. (these puns are getting quite good right?)

I will explain the points a little bit more in the real presentation.

In short:
My first slide is about why I chose it.

• Freedom, the choice to choose what you want to create and solve
• Control, you are in full control of your successes and failures
• Discipline, nobody will wake you up (except your alarm clock). It's internal growth.

Next I explain what entrepreneurship is about

• Create and improve a product, and sell it.

(this seems short and powerful right?) (on a second note maybe too short, I can go into the risk aspect/innovation aspect of it)

Third one is about what makes an entrepreneur successful

• Creates massive value
• Fails fast and learns quick
• Adapts quickly
• Has a purpose
• Micro-unpatience, macro-patience

Then I tell about my past wantrepreneurial ventures, what I'm currently doing and maybe what I want to do later if I have enough time. (both in life and in the presentation).

Is the order good? Any points what I'm missing, critiques? It doesn't have to be perfect, just well understood and quick to the point.

 

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