Looking For Criticism & Advice For Video Ad

[AlphaWulf]

Hey guys, finished a video and would like some advice on what I do wrong and what I do right.

Link is: Building An Email List That Loves You

I'm targeting people interested in email marketing and online passive income.

My concern is that my CTA at the end is not strong enough. I could go more into detail about the offer and the benefits.

Any criticism or advice would be awesome.

Thanks guys.

 

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[Gareth]

So my question is after watching the video is..."Who the heck are you and why should i listen to you?" (your own words)

Or have you already built that relationship already?

 

[AlphaWulf]

So my question is after watching the video is..."Who the heck are you and why should i listen to you?" (your own words)

Or have you already built that relationship already?

Good point. Part of the audience will already have some trust built up but part will also be cold traffic.

I will include screenshots of people telling me how much they love the email sequence and how they are looking forward to the next email form me. That'll answer the 'why should I listen to you.' (Because you want to be getting the same feedback from your list instead of "unsubscribed" notices)

Thanks!

 

[Scot]

Since Im actually in the middle of cultivating my email list, I signed up. I'm curious.

 

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[AlphaWulf]

Since Im actually in the middle of cultivating my email list, I signed up. I'm curious.

Awesome! Everything is not live yet so the first email in the sequence (including the welcome email) will be sent out within a couple of days.

 

[Scot]

Awesome! Everything is not live yet so the first email in the sequence (including the welcome email) will be sent out within a couple of days.

I've been BAMBOOZELED! I want my three payments of $0.00 back!


Looking forward to checking it out. But I'll admit, I signed up using my spam email haha