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Initial Logo Concepts

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Ok folks, which one do you like best?

This is for an athletic apparel company (yoga, crossfit and will also include accessories like yoga mats, supplements, etc..)
 
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I like number three the best (although I think the bird should be the same height as the text).
 

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I really like number 3 and number 7 (especially number 7).

All the others look very corporate and boring and I personally wouldn't associate them with an athletic brand.
 

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I posted this on FB and got a lot of great feedback. It seems the majority like #3 with a few caveats:
1. Not everyone likes the eagle
2. Not everyone sees the eagle as being "V"

Here is another one where the font looks a little more sporty
 
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Looks like I made the same mistake in not knowing the bird was a V.

I like the bird. Why not have a normal V and have the bird centred above the text?
 

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I like #3 the best, but I think you might want to consider a new style.

The logo style doesn't scream athletics to me at all. I looked at the logos before reading and I thought it was some type of financial company; at least something to do with corporate business.
 

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Sorry, let me specify...the name of the brand is "Venvici"

I will play around with some of those concepts. Stay tuned
 
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What would make this look more like a sports apparel brand...different font? different image instead of the eagle?
 

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A few more designs. Which ones work best?
 

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3 or 4 in the first post, or 2.jpg in the 2nd post.

I always have a tough time when images are embedded as characters.
The goal is to simplify for the customer, really only have a limited attention span and won't bother figuring out what it is, no matter how aesthetically-pleasing the design is.
 
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Like the #3 eagle emblem, but not the logo, or the font style. As another mentioned, it seems more like a financial company vs a fitness biz. And yes, no one will figure out that the eagle also doubles as a V. Good luck.
 

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Thanks MJ. I made some updates to the designs/fonts so hopefully that fixes both of those issues. They are posted above.
 

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I'm going with 2.jpg on your second post.
 
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I like 2 and 6. Other square looking eagles look somewhat tyrannical. I also love the large black/orange eagle that you have in two of your later logos, but it seems to be more directed at and appealing to women.

And no, I do not see a "V" in the eagles. There are two Vs in your name. The first one is spelled out clearly but the second one nobody will notice.
 
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The safer one number 3. But actually no one very boring. If back to me I will power the bird(phoenix) I will make him borning with big flame the colour brighty background black and hold to words by equivalent way. Emagine it on clothing and equipment brilliant [emoji4]. Good luck
 

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The logo style doesn't scream athletics to me at all. I looked at the logos before reading and I thought it was some type of financial company; at least something to do with corporate business.

This.
That being said, the golden eagle in #2 would be perfect... for luxury brand.
 
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I like 7 on your second post, however, I would of never linked the logo to fitness. From a branding standpoint, I would incorporate something that screams fitness.
 

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