Lex DeVille
Sweeping Shadows From Dreams
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To me the site looks good overall. The designs don't really stand out on their own except maybe one or two. There's not much for me to connect with or experience. At least on the product pages I think you need better copy. Right now it just says what you get, but how am I supposed to know all that stuff you talked about regarding South Asian heritage and styles if you don't tell me? The About page isn't enough because I probably didn't visit it. So as someone just landing on your site, I see clothes that might as well be on the shelves of Target, and designer branding that's like every other designer fashion brand. That isn't to say it's bad, just that there's nothing for me to connect with. I'm not invested in your story.
[REMOVED] - Pattern and Symmetry Inspired Clothing
Why isn't that
###### - Where East and West Collide
It's little touches that draw people in and get them to care. Use the word South Asian. Describe what that means. What are the styles like? How does each item reflect that heritage? In what ways? When I buy X t-shirt, how does that show how cultured I am? Again, you have to tell me. I don't fill in these blanks on my own as a prospect. Now, where else can you try advertising for low to no cost? Facebook Groups might be one place if you find the right one. Reddit could be an option too. Not sure, just throwing out ideas.
[REMOVED] - Pattern and Symmetry Inspired Clothing
Why isn't that
###### - Where East and West Collide
It's little touches that draw people in and get them to care. Use the word South Asian. Describe what that means. What are the styles like? How does each item reflect that heritage? In what ways? When I buy X t-shirt, how does that show how cultured I am? Again, you have to tell me. I don't fill in these blanks on my own as a prospect. Now, where else can you try advertising for low to no cost? Facebook Groups might be one place if you find the right one. Reddit could be an option too. Not sure, just throwing out ideas.