A few opinions of mine regarding the site.
The Website
1. Remove the big wall of text. Less is more. Use better copy and get to the point.
2. Change the logo. I think it's good looking but the question mark doesn't make sense with your theme. Buyers are looking for the exact car. So they already know what to find.
3. Your website is about finding the exact car you want. I recommend changing the name.
The Name
1. Whichride4you is too long and a mouthful. I understand you like the name and think it's brilliant but it comes off as spammy. Buyers who sees this name through email campaigns won't open the email, in my opinion.
2. The theme of the site is finding the complete car. So use a better name. Here are some examples:
The Website (Pt. 2)
1. I made a quick mock up of what the mobile version of the site could look like.
2. The site title should have an appealing font with eye catching colors.
3. The USP could be something like choose your ideal car in seconds. This might be a pretty bad USP but get creative and succinct.
4. Where the orange bar button is, replace with "view directory."
5. Where you see the steps, use a 3 step instructional with great looking logo designs explaining to the user how to easily use the site.
6. After the steps, you could use a video to further enhance the site.
7. Add social media logos and maybe reviews.
The Features
1. I like the features aspect of the site and how it visually shows the details after the search.
2. However, fix the bugs and make it look more appealing and organized.
Note:
- These are just a few opinions of mine regarding where I think the site needs improvement.
- My suggestions makes the site simple, speedy, and user-friendly.
Important: determine who's your target market since there seems to be ambiguity here.
The Website
1. Remove the big wall of text. Less is more. Use better copy and get to the point.
2. Change the logo. I think it's good looking but the question mark doesn't make sense with your theme. Buyers are looking for the exact car. So they already know what to find.
3. Your website is about finding the exact car you want. I recommend changing the name.
The Name
1. Whichride4you is too long and a mouthful. I understand you like the name and think it's brilliant but it comes off as spammy. Buyers who sees this name through email campaigns won't open the email, in my opinion.
2. The theme of the site is finding the complete car. So use a better name. Here are some examples:
- totalwheels.com
- truewheels.com
- totalvehicle.com
The Website (Pt. 2)
1. I made a quick mock up of what the mobile version of the site could look like.
2. The site title should have an appealing font with eye catching colors.
3. The USP could be something like choose your ideal car in seconds. This might be a pretty bad USP but get creative and succinct.
4. Where the orange bar button is, replace with "view directory."
5. Where you see the steps, use a 3 step instructional with great looking logo designs explaining to the user how to easily use the site.
6. After the steps, you could use a video to further enhance the site.
7. Add social media logos and maybe reviews.
The Features
1. I like the features aspect of the site and how it visually shows the details after the search.
2. However, fix the bugs and make it look more appealing and organized.
Note:
- These are just a few opinions of mine regarding where I think the site needs improvement.
- My suggestions makes the site simple, speedy, and user-friendly.
Important: determine who's your target market since there seems to be ambiguity here.