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sparechange

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Holy... I'm trying to buy a computer on kijji and craigslist and OMG! People are not even listing the specs of the computer, ram , CPU etc... Horrible pictures or even worse fake ones. Are you selling items online? Why should I buy YOUR product v the other ones around? Do you list the benefits of why I should give YOU MY money? Make it quick and simple... In my case I need to know the ram, CPU, and operating system / price with a good picture showing it's condition. "They" say over 90% businesses fail.... I wonder why???????
 
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Holy... I'm trying to buy a computer on kijji and craigslist and OMG! People are not even listing the specs of the computer, ram , CPU etc... Horrible pictures or even worse fake ones. Are you selling items online? Why should I buy YOUR product v the other ones around? Do you list the benefits of why I should give YOU MY money? Make it quick and simple... In my case I need to know the ram, CPU, and operating system / price with a good picture showing it's condition. "They" say over 90% businesses fail.... I wonder why???????

Why not contact them and offer a better sales copy for a specific sum? Just a suggestion to someone who wants to make a quick buck.
 

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Why not contact them and offer a better sales copy for a specific sum? Just a suggestion to someone who wants to make a quick buck.

hm neat idea, although these were just small private ads, but the idea is good
 

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Just another reason I've always had such good luck with my service businesses. I always gave lots of information. I used correct grammar and spelling to top it off since not many others do in most service businesses. In my current business I use the same 'tactics' to sell more than my small team and I can keep up with. One would think it was common sense and not 'tactics' but these days, what is common about sense? :)
 
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