MarekvBeek
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First of all, props for your massive execution!
I like these. Prefer the 2 sentences over 1 or 3.
The bolded I think suits best for your product. Because you target the benefit (insane strenght), say that you don't sell crap (blue razzberry) and actually sell a good product (real stuff).
It says to me: "I've got to know more, what is this real stuff?"
And then you can tell about the clean/pure stuff on your website.
- Unusual taste. Unusual results.
- Choke it down. Rev it up.
- We tried to hide the taste. You won’t hide the results.
- Forgettable taste. Unforgettable results.
- With a taste like this, you know it works.
- Suck up the taste. Bask in the gains.
- Trade taste for real supplements.
- Trade taste for supplements that work.
- Weird taste? That’s how you know it works.
- Doesn’t taste great. But you’ll look amazing.
- Trade in flavor for supplements that ACTUALLY work. (edited)
- Workouts so good, you’ll survive the taste.
- What the hell is that taste? The glory of quad-busting squats.
- Why does it taste like that? Because it works.
- “Why does it taste weird?” “Shut up and lift.” (I envision this as two people, with the response coming from a much more ripped individual)
- Want insane strength? Give up the blue razzberry pre-workout and try the real stuff.
- Real men don’t need blue cotton candy pre-workout. Real men use Focal Force.
I like these. Prefer the 2 sentences over 1 or 3.
The bolded I think suits best for your product. Because you target the benefit (insane strenght), say that you don't sell crap (blue razzberry) and actually sell a good product (real stuff).
It says to me: "I've got to know more, what is this real stuff?"
And then you can tell about the clean/pure stuff on your website.
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