Thread: The word "retire" or "retirement"

Just seeking a general opinion here for the community ...

My book's subtitle is still undecided. By subtitle I mean, the secondary title that describes the main title.

For example ...

The Millionaire Fastlane <--- Main title
101 Ideas to Get Rich Fast <-- Sub title

The "101 ideas" is not real, but just an example. My question and concern is, should I use the word "retire" in the subtitle? I fear that the word has connotations of "old" and my target audience is really young people ... say 16-30.

That said, do you think its a danger to use the word "retire" in the subtitle? Even if it is something like "retire young" or "retire 40 years early" or "retire rich?"

Your thoughts? Young people? Does seeing the word "retire" in a book title turn you off, or steer you clear?

It has a negative connotation with it. Depending on how you use it it can be ok, but as someone else said, its used to often in book titles.

I think the phrase up at the top of the forum would be ok, assuming if the main title of the book was anything close to The Fastlane To Millions.

The Fastlane To Millions
Will Your Road to Wealth Devour 40 Years of Your Life?

I think using that or something like that for a subtitle says more than get rich fast, it mentions time. All the time you would spend otherwise becoming successful. It also kind of implies that you could already be on your way to being successful, but that it may take you a very long time.

Using that or having another question to the potential book buyer would be good.

Who knows buy the time you are done with the book completely and not just a rough draft, a better subtitle may come to you.

I agree that the stereotypical connotation of retire relates to old and passive.

Hey MJ-I was the VP Creative Director for a huge Int'l ad agency previously. I specialized in branding and positioning specifically. PM me if you'd like me to pitch in with the real title (confidentially). Would be happy to help.

MJ, "retire" is a great word because it already has traction in the media. But try to twist the headline with "retire" in it. Controversial headlines can do wonders.

How about we form a new organization/demographic?

YAFERS
Young
Adults
For
Early
Retirement
(Seriously)

I like either retire or retirement just fine, I am resting up for it because I will be a busy SOB when I get there.... Have some serious makeup work to do on some of my "Just because I damned well feel like it" projects.